"Everbody Breaks" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami On: August 21, 2005 23:23 CDT Comment/Review: if you dontwork on this more i will hunt you down ^_^
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Reviewed By: lars_2007 On: August 21, 2005 19:15 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: DON'T Stop!!! This is a great fic and i love reading it!!! one of the best i can find and i look at alot of fiction!
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: August 21, 2005 13:44 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please continue! I'm enjoying the other's point of views on what happened with 'Fei. Please update soon! -Till Then!
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Reviewed By: pyro_cat_ On: August 21, 2005 13:38 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I LOVE THE STORY! PLEASE WRITE MORE! the portraial of wufei and the interactions between all the boys is just drool worthy. so please please please write more!
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Reviewed By: shenlong_pilot On: August 21, 2005 11:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Well I really like this fic and hope you continue to write it and that you update pretty soon.
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Title: Everybody Breaks 1-6 Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 17:11 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I can sum this story up in one word "Wonderful". I am so glad that I stopped to read this because this really is an awesome. It gets better with each chapter, with very descriptive details about the emotions that Wufei is experiecing as well as the others pilots. In short we get to watch as Wufei's character evolves and grows and comes to know and rediscover things about himself and it really is truly wonderful to watch. It is also nice to see how each of the pilots expresses their feelings toward Wufei and how they can sense all of the conflict that is swirling around inside him and yet they are trying to show him that no matter what that they love him and want him and that they want him to be apart of their lives. I think that you have done a great job depicting Wufei's character and it is a treat watching him learn new things about himself. For example, I love watching him with the children while he is learning once again why he loves martial arts. It's funny how children can make everything seem new and fresh again. Once again this is really a great story and I am looking forward to reading more!
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Title: XD Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami On: July 23, 2005 12:30 CDT Comment/Review: you know, the day this fic ends is the day i will cry because its so awesome! Can't wait for more ^_~`*hint hint* and who new Quatre would be into bondage? haha! great job keep it up!
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Title: X3 Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami On: July 22, 2005 12:05 CDT Comment/Review: very good this was a nice insert in your story, im glad because i was also wondering what the others felt and was hoping to get something along this line *claps* ^_^ now i hope to see more before i die from lack a well written fanfics!
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Reviewed By: Cero Morrigan On: July 22, 2005 00:17 CDT Comment/Review: You nearly had me in tears there. I loved it, and it made the wait worth it, though I would request you do not make us wait so long again. Also, on a lighter note, almost also counts in handgrenades.
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Title: WHAT!!!!!!! Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 19:52 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: YOU MUST WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! I AM DEMANDING YOU TO DO IT!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LEFT ME WITH THAT CLIFF-HANGER!!!! MAN, I AM QUAKING ON MY SKATEBOARD IN ANGER!!!! PLEASE ...... NO... YOU BETTER WRITE MORE!!!! THAT'S JUST NOT RIGHT TO LEAVE YOUR READER HANGING LIKE THAT!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE AND HURRY BECAUSE I AM WAITING!!!!! ~MANGACHILD420 IF IT HELPS YOU......... I LOVE YOU ^-^P
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Title: O_O Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami On: July 04, 2005 11:03 CDT Comment/Review: that was very cruel...very cruel.....O_O i think you just kicked a puppy with that ending >_< please write soon! i fear for my sanity ^_^
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Title: moremoremore!!!!! Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 01:44 CDT Comment/Review: You sadistic Wench! Write more right now beforei sic Balinese on you! He is a womanizer... well, an ANYthing-izer... so be warned! (or maybe excited? I never know what he'll do...
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind 9nsi) On: July 04, 2005 01:27 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AH! WHY'D YOU STOP THERE?!!!! I can't wait to see how Quatre punishes Wufei. Update soon! -Till Then!
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Title: Oooh Reviewed By: Sandy (Sandileina) On: July 02, 2005 12:18 CDT Comment/Review: Please, please write a fourth installment. I really like it so far! ^^ How can you write such long chapters? It's beyond me. I guess I could write two or three chapters and stick them together, but... *shrugs* Anyway, please do continue! *Throws Pester Parrots* There. The Pester Parrots will annoy you foever unless you start writing ^_~ Howsabout a 1x2x5x3x4 or whatever, all five of them together anyway, with a non-blindfolded Wufei...?
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Reviewed By: la_tristezza On: July 02, 2005 04:11 CDT Comment/Review: I really like your story! Your Wufei is very true to his character and your writing is very good. I'm impressed!
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