"Everbody Breaks" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 23:23 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I also send an email reply, but I basically just wanted to say that I really want to see this story continued. It has really been a pleasure to read and all of the characters are very well writtenand their emotions are depicted so very well. It would be a shame not see this story developed more because I want to watch as Wufei continues to emerge out of his shell and discover the person that he always wanted to be.
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Reviewed By: Shattered Dreams (not signed in) On: August 23, 2005 14:27 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Good stuff. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: sound On: August 22, 2005 20:41 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: PLEASE UPDATE! I love both and I'll be really dissapointed if you don't continue. Your writing really is wonderful and is both creative and full of feeling. It's much better than most fics which are crudely done or basicly porn. Your fic gives me hope that fanfiction can be well done.
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Reviewed By: Scythe-chan On: August 21, 2005 23:24 CDT Comment/Review: wahhh! i love both soo much! i like seeing t form the point of veiws AND the series@! ahhh! you HAVE to finish it!!! X3
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Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami On: August 21, 2005 23:23 CDT Comment/Review: if you dontwork on this more i will hunt you down ^_^
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Reviewed By: lars_2007 On: August 21, 2005 19:15 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: DON'T Stop!!! This is a great fic and i love reading it!!! one of the best i can find and i look at alot of fiction!
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: August 21, 2005 13:44 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please continue! I'm enjoying the other's point of views on what happened with 'Fei. Please update soon! -Till Then!
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Reviewed By: pyro_cat_ On: August 21, 2005 13:38 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I LOVE THE STORY! PLEASE WRITE MORE! the portraial of wufei and the interactions between all the boys is just drool worthy. so please please please write more!
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Reviewed By: shenlong_pilot On: August 21, 2005 11:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Well I really like this fic and hope you continue to write it and that you update pretty soon.
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Title: Everybody Breaks 1-6 Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 17:11 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I can sum this story up in one word "Wonderful". I am so glad that I stopped to read this because this really is an awesome. It gets better with each chapter, with very descriptive details about the emotions that Wufei is experiecing as well as the others pilots. In short we get to watch as Wufei's character evolves and grows and comes to know and rediscover things about himself and it really is truly wonderful to watch. It is also nice to see how each of the pilots expresses their feelings toward Wufei and how they can sense all of the conflict that is swirling around inside him and yet they are trying to show him that no matter what that they love him and want him and that they want him to be apart of their lives. I think that you have done a great job depicting Wufei's character and it is a treat watching him learn new things about himself. For example, I love watching him with the children while he is learning once again why he loves martial arts. It's funny how children can make everything seem new and fresh again. Once again this is really a great story and I am looking forward to reading more!
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Title: XD Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami On: July 23, 2005 12:30 CDT Comment/Review: you know, the day this fic ends is the day i will cry because its so awesome! Can't wait for more ^_~`*hint hint* and who new Quatre would be into bondage? haha! great job keep it up!
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Title: X3 Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami On: July 22, 2005 12:05 CDT Comment/Review: very good this was a nice insert in your story, im glad because i was also wondering what the others felt and was hoping to get something along this line *claps* ^_^ now i hope to see more before i die from lack a well written fanfics!
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Reviewed By: Cero Morrigan On: July 22, 2005 00:17 CDT Comment/Review: You nearly had me in tears there. I loved it, and it made the wait worth it, though I would request you do not make us wait so long again. Also, on a lighter note, almost also counts in handgrenades.
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Title: WHAT!!!!!!! Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 19:52 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: YOU MUST WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! I AM DEMANDING YOU TO DO IT!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LEFT ME WITH THAT CLIFF-HANGER!!!! MAN, I AM QUAKING ON MY SKATEBOARD IN ANGER!!!! PLEASE ...... NO... YOU BETTER WRITE MORE!!!! THAT'S JUST NOT RIGHT TO LEAVE YOUR READER HANGING LIKE THAT!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE AND HURRY BECAUSE I AM WAITING!!!!! ~MANGACHILD420 IF IT HELPS YOU......... I LOVE YOU ^-^P
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Title: O_O Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami On: July 04, 2005 11:03 CDT Comment/Review: that was very cruel...very cruel.....O_O i think you just kicked a puppy with that ending >_< please write soon! i fear for my sanity ^_^
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