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"And They Thought One Thief Was Enough" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
Reviewed By: Marisa On: August 30, 2005 16:47 CDT Rating(s): Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I like it a lot so far. But I think you should make the chapters at least a little longer, that way the readers will get a bit more informatoin. I think your story will turn out great if you take my advice or not. I hope you get tons of revews. p.s. This is the first time I've done this.
Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp (it says I'm logged in, but I'm not...) On: June 23, 2005 16:47 CDT Comment/Review: ^^ Laura reminds me of BHS, only blonde. And, something I noticed a few times: you used the wrong 'it's'. You said 'it's' when you meant 'its'. As in 'The turned to face it's distractor' or whatever the line was. 'It's' is the contraction for 'it is', and 'its' is possessive, okay? ^^ And 'neiborhood' is 'neighborhood'. Anyway, this is cool. Update soon, okay?

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