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| "A Comedy of Errors" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Anorexic Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2001 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent job. You did mess up about two words in the last chapter (I counted, and I think it was exactly two), the fic was put together extremely well. I kind of felt sorry for Miyako though. I know, I'll just go off pretending that she's with Iori, for no other reason that they're the only two left. | Reviewed By: Anorexic Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2001 21:46 CST
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I like the way you've portrayed Miyako in this, although my muse refuses to come out due to the way you've portrayed her. She fails to realize that it's the way I portray her, except worse. Excellent job, and poor Ken. | Reviewed By: Anorexic Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2001 21:37 CST
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OK, I'll give a rating at the end but, *covers his mouth as he laughs* this is just hilarious. I love how you portray Miyako. And one thing I noticed, Takeru and Kari are probably going to produce all the heirs in the kingdom, aren't they? |
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