| "Apocalypse" Reviews/Comments [ 173 ] |
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Title: Well, what do you know, I'm reviewing on time ^^
Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (NLI) On: April 28, 2006 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess that's a good thing he lost the baby, it would be strange to raise a child of your enemy. keh *kicks Yami* :P Still loving your portrayal of the characters and a good bit of humor w/ Bakura & Aria. heh heh heh, they're hilarious. ^^ And I'm loving it. XD As long as everyone's ok, it's good enough. *huggles for chibi* ^^ That was cute that chibi is named after Baku-kun. Can wait til the next time. Til then. ^_~
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (NLI) On: April 27, 2006 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man that's an evil cliffie! Hmm, baby or no baby. I don't know, no baby would be good for them and they need relief. But a baby = drama/angst and I'd think it'd be interesting to read... i really dunno. But anyways, loved the lemon, hehehe. And the story's still as good as it was always. ^^ Luving it still. Seems that most of them are ok. I'm glad. I apologize for late reviewing again. But I must go so, til the next time. ^_~
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Title: No Baby
Reviewed By: Sailor Optimal Optimus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your series so far, but I have to say No for Ryou being pregnant. He's been through too much already, and having Yami's kid would probably either put him over the edge or kill him. So no baby, please. Give him and Bakura a break at least from all the Yami torture. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: Aislynn G. (being lazy) On: April 20, 2006 09:45 CDT
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*nearly faints* You just HAD to stop it THERE!!!! I nearly screamed at the screen! ::hands over another evil cliffie award:: There, you deserve that. Evil cliffie-writing authoress... As far as baby or no, I guess it would depend on how long you want the story to continue. I think having the baby would be interesting (think of the tabloids!) and more interesting yet if it turned out to be a carbon-copy of Yami. No baby would be a relief for them though, and they've been so much already... So, I guess the REAL question is more angst or not? What to do? Decisions...decisions...decisions... Oh what the heck, go for the baby. I know Ryou will love it, no matter who the father is.
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (NLI) On: April 07, 2006 02:30 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So much drama, I'm not sure where to start. lol. Ok, well first off, I'm really glad they beat Yami! Whoo! And that Mariku & Baku had a good bit of torturing, mwahahahaha! More is needed! *stab stab stab etc* However, I really hope Aten is alright, please don't let him die yet! Robbie and everyone else needs him here. *prays for him* And I'm also glad Aria's baby is fine, ^^ Lots of suspense throughout the story, had me quivering in suspense. ^^ I also apologize for not being able to review the last ch or so. And I hope you will have a good break away. *huggles* Look forward to the next installment. Til then. ^_~
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Title: I'm back
Reviewed By: Yamidiot(too busy to log in) On: April 05, 2006 11:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, the story is still a masterpiece
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me likey the story. nice job!
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Reviewed By: Aislynn Goldleaf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 11:50 CST
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Ok...there should have been a warning for all the anger erupting all over creation in the beginning...and I applaud the Ishtars for what they did, though, I think they're going to have to go back and do it over again at least...oh, 20 times. After that satisfying paragraph, I nearly had my heart break when I read about Robbie & Aten in the ambulance. Yay for Aria, but her joy is overshadowed heavily by what's happening to her twin. I don't want Aten to leave Robbie!!!! ::starts praying for a miracle::
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Title: How could you do that???
Reviewed By: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! On: March 21, 2006 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe you killed Aten!(Does the cabbage patch)Yami.Is dead.WHOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!Update soon!! (offers Aten and Robbie plushies)Pleez!!!!!!!
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Title: How could you do that???
Reviewed By: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! On: March 21, 2006 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe you killed Aten!(Does the cabbage patch)Yami.Is dead.WHOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!Update soon!! (offers Aten and Robbie plushies)Pleez!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: AislynnG (not signed in) On: March 21, 2006 12:25 CST
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YAY Yuugi! Here, I'll help you out! ::adds a few kicks to Yami's head with steel-toe workboots:: There! That's for killing Aten! That one's for poor Robbie! ::a really hard kick:: One for Ryou! ::kick:: Bakura! ::kick:: Marik! ::kick:: Malik! ::kick:: A few more for Aten & Robbie! ::kick kick kick kick kick!:: Hmmm... there's still some skull left together... ::kick kick kick kick kick kick kick...etc...::
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Reviewed By: kisthetic On: March 07, 2006 16:59 CST
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One time when I was walking home from work this guy just collapsed right in front of me. I couldn't feel a pulse after CPR and began to panic, then I suddenly remembered something from my first aid class and thumped him as hard as possible right on the chest. This not only started up his heart again, but he woke up, looked at me, then burst into laughter, making me very perplexed. ~ aside from the random story, i thought that the fic was all in all very good, but slightly drawn out, and repetative,that's just my opinion anyway. update soon. WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE :)
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Reviewed By: Lady_Elfskye(nli) On: March 07, 2006 11:20 CST
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Wow.. I'm just playing catchup since things kinda fell apart here. Been awhile and I can say I've truly missed this story. I'm waiting for the next as patient as I can. I know the kids will be victorious. Take care hon. Sending vibes!!
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (not logged in) On: March 04, 2006 03:01 CST
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Still so suspenseful and interesting. Grr that no good son of a bitch, die Yami die!!! Burn and get devored! Mwahahahaha! *echoes of evil laughter follows*
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (not logged in) On: February 24, 2006 23:30 CST
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Ooh, everybody is there to watch the final battle, so suspenseful. And yes those matches are nice, hehehe *lights them and throws them on the no good bastard Yami* Bwahahaha! Stupid evil Yami! Must burn, must die! *evil grin* Alright, I think that enough for today, lol. Til the next ch. ^_~
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