| "Apocalypse" Reviews/Comments [ 173 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 21:20 CDT
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Of course u can post it! I mean its your characters ^^ Agains sorry i took so long. I knew it!! I knew Kadin-wahtever was Yami! Wiat Ryou pregnant? Again?? I'm not freaked about that I'm fraked about him carrying yami's appalind seed! *shudders* ewewewewewewewew!!!!!!!! and u know daniel sir, if you need help kicking that racist bitch and whore that are unfortuantely your mother in law and sister in law, let me know. i can use their heads for soccer balls *cracks knuckles* and i spoent hte entire season kick the other players in the legs when they stole the ball from me so i have very strong legs.
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Title: Shadow of Light (not logged in)
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 10:23 CDT
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*hugs aten tightly* you are a good boy. kaldin is a bastard whore of hte more bastard pharaoh. soon robbie will be home and you two can cuddle *hands him a beany money to hold* lemon was good but aye this story has me on edge! well hope to hear from u soon, what did u think of hte link i send ya? ogtta go laterz!
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Title: *is paralysed with shock*
Reviewed By: Draza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
umm...wow...holy shit...that's all i can say. I've gotta tell you that this is probably one of the BEST chapters you've ever written. I'm actually not pissed about the cliffie *narrows eyes* ...much....and this is one hell of a twist in the story....but...*wimpers and wails* i don't w-want bakura and ryou to b-break up!! oh and i got lost for a sec in this chappie, when Ryou was pointing his finger at Bakura, was it HIM or Bakura who said "we're through Hikari"? cuse the way it was written, sounded like Ryou said it, but he's the hikari, not bakura....hmmm.. oh well.
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Title: i'm logged in! only because the thingy want let me review unlogged in anymore
Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 00:01 CDT
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I foresee that the climax is near, but not quite. lol. EVilness! *ties Kadin up with chains hanging him upside down underwater w/ fished poking at him* Swordfishes that is. *glares* Anyways, nice ch. well nice as drama is. You're right the 'break up thing' was unforetold. And Ryou needs to be in his right mind. Later. ^_~
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Title: finally let me in!!
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 10:19 CDT
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oh damn no!! those poor kids... this is gonna scar them for life! and kaiden, leave aten alone you horny bastard!! *takes a swing at me* i'm gonna use your head as a soccer balls along wiht those assholes!! before i vent m rage here's something i prosmie u a lot time ago. i finally finsihed and i konw it's not that great but... i hope u like it. Final Battle (http://photobucket.com/albums/b144/JakalQueen/?action=view¤t=sca n.jpg)
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Reviewed By: Aislynn Goldleaf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 07:47 CDT
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Hmm... I need a fishhook, some sugar, Kadin staked out naked on the ground outside... oh, and a pickle. I really want a pickle. ::stops to raid fridge:: ::comes back crunching a deli dill:: It might take a few days, a week at the outside, but I guarantee that Kadin wouldn't survive.
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Title: O.o uh...
Reviewed By: Draza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grabs crystal ball* i predict a great headach approching....there will be arguments...and more headaches...yes, they are a very common vision in this stories future...
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 12:00 CDT
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holy..*blinks* *beats the living hell outta kadin with sporkofdoom* Guh.. *huggles alla them*
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Reviewed By: Aislynn Goldleaf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 05:50 CDT
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::hands over another golden cliff-shaped award:: Another evil cliffie! Yami really needs to be taught a lesson, doing all that to poor Ryou! I bet Kadin is really Yami in disguise, and it makes me really hate him!!! Well, I'm not going to hold my breath until your next update...I'd die and never find out what happened! But I am breathlessly awaiting it! I really like your website too!
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GRR! Evilness, *glares* It's all Yami's fault, and the stupid F****** Crusaders! Gah so much suspense, I swear you make the best dramas. ^^ Seriously hope everyone'll be ok, and evil people need to die!!!
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Title: IM GOING NUTS
Reviewed By: Yamidiot [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 23:49 CDT
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YOU EVIL AUTHOR YOU LEAVE CLIFFIES
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Title: WHY
Reviewed By: hot_girl_kai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 16:57 CDT
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DON'T LET JOEY DIE I LOVE JOEY AND IF HE DIES I'M GONNA SCREAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FROM YAMIALEX17
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Reviewed By: emeraldisles [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 23:19 CDT
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AHH...er? What is this about? I hope you are alright! Even so, I can't wait till sunday..it seems to far away. This is a very uh...cliffy chapter. I really really really need to see what happened to joey. *bounces in her seat* Alright. I'm sorry for whatever has happened. I hope everything is alright. Keep up the good work!!
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Title: *wimpers*
Reviewed By: Draza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 14:55 CDT
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oh no!!! JOEY!!! *lets loose a roar that rivals the Nightmare Dragon* YOU BASTARDS!!!! *grabs millenium fork and runs into Kaiba Corp building* I'LL SAVE YOU CHIBIS!!!! AND I'LL F****** KILL THOSE F****** BASTARD CRUSADERS FOR MORAOL DECENCY-MY-ASS!!!!!!!!!!!! NOBODY HURTS THEM AND GETS AWAY WITH IT!!! NOT ON MY WATCH!!!!!!! *charges*
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Reviewed By: Yakari Taito [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 09:20 CDT
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I thought the last cliffie was a bad one but no this one is 10 times worst! D: You're not really going to kill off Joey are you? *whimper* Poor Alex. :(
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