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| "Mine." Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: cloudnomi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 15:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
What a wonderfully different story! Yay! I always like different stories, there's more fun in it. Can't wait to see what happens next. ^_^
| Reviewed By: Rika-chan On: September 10, 2005 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
About the "clicked" thing, try using "clucked". Its a noise that people who ride horses use to make them run faster. Also, i love this story so much! You have so much writing talent and how you fit everyone into the story is amazing. I also like how you made Squall have a much lesser part in this fan work than most that have him included. Very nice. I do love the cowboy so and am very happy that i found such a great work that involves him and yaoi-ness. Never read this pairing before, but i like the idea. Especially the savage/civilian type. Very nice. I can't wait untill the nasty stuff gets going XD. Mmmmm....yaoi....^.^ no one can blame me though ^_-.
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