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Reviewed By: cloudnomi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 11:21 CDT
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Yay! I'm so happy you finished, I was getting worried the ending would never come. XD But it did and it was wonderful. Much happiness all around.
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Reviewed By: dracoqueen22 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 20:42 CST
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Ahhh, you must, you must update this soon. I cannot take the suspense. I have to know. Is Zell going to send Irvine back? Is Irvine going to fight for his love? Or will his desire to see home again win over all? What will happen to Seifer? Will he and Squall get together permanently? I must know! Great chapter but gah, I must know!
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Reviewed By: delonariel On: December 14, 2006 00:32 CST
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I'm very satisfied with the last chapter. So much happening.
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Reviewed By: vixie_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 00:34 CST
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bad Irvine! Bad! hehe Squall left Rinoa! Right on!
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Reviewed By: dracoqueen22 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 03:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*fanning myself* That was an incredibly HOT scene. And woot! Rinoa got dumped! Points for you. She is an disturbingly whiny creature who thinks she needs to have her way. Seifer and Squall all the way. Another great chapter my dear! I'm eager to see more.
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Reviewed By: dracoqueen22 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Oooo, so good. Though I nearly died laughing when Irvine had to be carried through the camp and then dumped at Zell's feet. "this is yours" Gawd, I cracked up! Though I suppose I should have been feeling something else I couldn't help the giggles. Ahshey is freaking awesome! I really love this story and can't wait to read more. Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: delonariel On: August 25, 2006 11:39 CDT
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Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
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Reviewed By: delonariel On: July 08, 2006 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I've forgotten to check for updates so that's two new chapters for me! I re-read the whole story a few weeks ago, and I just have to tell you that I adore Dot(dotdot)
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Reviewed By: rararasputin On: June 14, 2006 18:50 CDT
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I'm going to die unless you update soon 0_0 This is like the greatest fic ever, in a really whacky, corny sort of way. Have you concidered letting Laguna in on the action. Maybe with Kiros? too few Kiros/Laguna fics around, if you ask me ^^
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Reviewed By: Asaka_Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 14:35 CST
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This is going really well! I like how take the time to develop Irvines' character in these new circumstances. I most certainly enjoy the way Zell is so caring, yet to very arrogant! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Devious Lil Devil On: March 16, 2006 08:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! i found a place where this is being updated. damn aff. trying to keep me away from my zell fix. i just adore this story and lightning. anyway....yay, they made it to the village. looks like evrything is going well, minus the usual gossip and whispering behind peoples backs. but what about seifer and squall? i highly doubt seifer's gonna wanna turn around the mintue they figure out that irvine is in the village. maybe squall will have to convince him to turn back using other means. *wink wink* i look foward to your next update. keep up the wonderful work!
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Reviewed By: Xo Shu Mhing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 14:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great writing. Great story. More of it please!
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Reviewed By: Mecam Nite [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story... it's just so sweet and perfect and awesome and funny.. i cant wait till you update! keep going!!!
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Reviewed By: cloudnomi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 12:33 CST
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I still love your story, it is most wonderful. It makes me squee with continued joy. And I wanna draw you a picture of sexy Irvine and Zell, but it will take time. But you inspired me, so hopefully I will get it done.
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Reviewed By: crystel_dream [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a hugely enjoyable story. Well written in a style which is easy to read, understand and follow, funny in places and very sweet - without being too sweet. You have had the courage to step away from the norm and have created very believable personalities for these characters; and the plot is very well thought out, always leaving the reader wanting to be able to go on to the next chapter to find out what happens. Please don't be put off by the 9 rated above. Your creativity for this fic is spot on. I'm afraid I'm one of these people who will only rate a 10 in that part for a totally original fic (i.e original characters as well as original plot). All in all a brilliant fic, one which really does deserve to be continued as I, for one would love to know what happens next.
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