| "Blood, Death, and Love" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Adela 4 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 19:55 CST
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Love it Please update soon...
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Reviewed By: Linwe On: August 10, 2005 17:15 CDT
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Very interesting story so far, I like it a lot. So just how did Aoshi and Sano come to stay at the Kamiya dojo (even though Aoshi is leaving now...)? Anyway, looking forward to more updates!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Koiyu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my.. im confused! Why's there Naruto in the story?? I'm REALLY confused. But its awsome still!
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Reviewed By: 00001 On: August 09, 2005 14:42 CDT
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Hey, where are the new chapters?! They new chapters you posted are for a Naruto fic! Please put up the right chapters, I've been waiting for this great fic for AGES! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: LadyEdwards On: July 16, 2005 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Doing great! I've been wondering when the updates would start! Oh man, thinking of Kenshin in such a dark light is definitely new but I like it. Keep it up!
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Title: My Review (duh!)
Reviewed By: Hanabi jou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You said that you didn't know what to write next so I'm gonna give you some suggestions: 1) Maybe you could let Kenshin keep his glamour! In other words, Kaoru could already know that the other two men were vampires, but didn't tell Kenshin. Then, Kenshin keeps his identity hidden without the knowledge that Kaoru already knows that the other men are vampires. If you don't follow me, I understand. It is a very complicated process... 2) Another idea, could be that Kaoru sees Kenshin with a victim, but doesn't tell Kenshin that she saw him and well...you kinda get it... 3) My final suggestion would be to keep Kenshin's identity hidden and not let Kaoru find out until...say a battle or when something big happens? Anyway, those were my suggestions and I will understad fully if you don't want to use them. I've never written a fanfiction with vampires... So, don't forget to update! I'm honestly looking forward to your next chapter! Ja`ne!
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Reviewed By: 00001 On: July 04, 2005 09:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! You got the right chapter up! I'm so happy! ^_^ Does Kaoru know that Aoshi and Sano (who I'm assuming are her 2 borders) are vampires? Does she know her sisters have vampire blood? And for that matter do they know she's a hunter? I have a feeling that Aoshi or Sano would be able to recoginize Kenshin...come on, how many people look like Kenshin? And Battousai is supposed to be notorious among vampires, right? Looking forward to your next chapter!
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Title: Where's chapter 2?
Reviewed By: 0000001 On: July 03, 2005 08:23 CDT
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Hey, where did chapter two go? This isn't the second chapter for this story. The chapter you posted is for a Naruto fic. Please put up the second chapter soon, I want to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: Mermaid Ninja On: June 27, 2005 19:35 CDT
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Just can't resist a good vamp fanfic!
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Reviewed By: Vathara On: June 26, 2005 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Interesting start so far. (Hiko a vampire... that explains a lot!) Please continue!
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Reviewed By: 00001 On: June 25, 2005 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting...I would love to see where you take this fic. I have to admit, I have a weakness for RK vampire fics. Update soon!
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