Reviewed By: Cynim [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 18:03 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Strait 8's ! :p Yeah, this story is quite interesting ! and Motoko has always been my favourite character, so I absolutely loved that last chapter ! The only thing that bothers me, is that there is not that great friendship that unites all the characters, as it is in the Manga and Anime. In your story, the girls don't really interact with each other (then again, it's only my personal opinion ! ^^). Looking forward for more !
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