| "A Lesson to Be Learned...PART 1!" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tsuki Tsubasa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 15:52 CDT
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That made absolutely no sense to me, but okay... You had fun, I can tell, and that's all that matters...
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Title: i loved it
Reviewed By: Inubabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i loved it. I was laughing by like the second line. It was so true. I hate the stupid fics where the author doesnt develope much of a plot or reason for ppl to do 'it'. And it seems the Sess/kag ones are the most dominant i've found. I loved your story...Do more if possible. ~~Inubabe
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Reviewed By: Kimiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 04:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol! I agree, I definitely dislike all the - Inu/Kik = Sess/Kag + horrible lemon = annoying plot - fics like that. It has just gotten to be ridiculous. At first, when I read the summary if your post, I felt that it was unnecessary, just because it can't change a thing, but then I read it. I still feel like that, but it *really* made me laugh. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 03:29 CDT
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lol thats was so FUNNY! Kagome sees them and shes like 'uh! why cant he fuck me like that!!' then sesshomaru is like "Kagome i love you! Lets fuck!" "ok!" "i love you, you worthless filthy human but im going to have to hurt you" "ok!" LOL I ALMOST FELL OVER
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Reviewed By: Imalazymystic [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that was certainly... different. Although some have said that the grammar and flow needed work... i think from reading the first paragraph or so that if you really sat down and *wanted* to write a serious story you could... but who wants that? I personally am a fan of just about anything as long as the writer can pull it off so that I\\\\\\\'m not laughing halfway through the first page,and I have seen a fair share of *decent* (note, i didnt say good) Sess/kag pairings. I found your one-shot to be very amusing, and really did bring out how most writers just want to get down to \\\\\\\"it\\\\\\\" and not develop any sort of plot. Very funny, and yea... whoever flamed you does need to read summaries a bit more closely before clicking the link to actually read the posted story. On that thought... ever notice the rising abundance of \\\\\\\"heat\\\\\\\" fics? Like the only way Inu and Kagome are going to get together is if the poor hanyou is attacked by some horrid overload of hormones? ah well... im rambling now... its 3am (why am I up?) To summarize and put it bluntly: You do good, have good day. Bye!
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Title: question
Reviewed By: midnight1212 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
would u really laugh?.... anyways love it and keep up the good work
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: Cutie Pie Hentai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 20:04 CDT
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Ok, I A) Unsually don't review one-shots because I'm a lazy SOB and B) Usually don't read Sess/Kag anything, because, well...it just, no matter how prolific the author, does not follow anything set out in the canon characterizations without totally neglecting the anime/manga creations. But your summary hooked me and I read. I completely understand the humor (even if others did not) and, for the "flamer" who insulted you and told you to keep your opinion to yourself- you DID specify that it was a parady, very clearly. Aren't they the idiots for reading, knowing full-well that you were making fun of the "illustrious" genre they so obviously adore. Bah. True, grammar and spelling and flow could have been more developed, but that was part of the charm, the "shock" value, if you will. Wham, Bam, thank you M'am, Ne?
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Title: Good stuff
Reviewed By: Crumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 15:50 CDT
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That's so great. I was laughing pretty hard the whole time too. All I see now are Kagome/Sesshoumaru stories now. But yeah, that was hilarious. Good job :p
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Reviewed By: tasha_chan28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 14:08 CDT
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LOL You're so right Sesshoumaru and Kagome are so overdone and almost all the stories have the same plot, horrid lemons, and bad spelling and grammar.
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Title: Lol
Reviewed By: InuyashaThinksImSexii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! THAT WAS GREAT! IT WAS AWESOME! I WAS LAUGHING MY ASS OFF WHILE READING IT! LMFAO! Lol. IT was so blunt.."Let's fuck." "Okay!" Lol. I loved it. XD Great job!
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Title: Funny
Reviewed By: Jenner93 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank You and that was sooooooooooooooooo funny
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Reviewed By: demonchick39 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 03:08 CDT
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YES FINALLY! SOMEONE AGREEDS WITH ME! OMG! Those stories are so annoying and they pop up like nonstop! YES! I LOVE YOU!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG ROFL LMAO DFL that was to funny! loved it! ^__^
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: yune-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! i love u!!!! u r the first one to actually do something soo soo soo good!!!! that was soo funny! werid... but funny those fics r soo stupid! Oh i saw inu and kik-ho talking or having sex its so over!!(like there was something!) then all of a sudden Sess comes down from the sky and said i love u and she says me too! wat the hell!! that was sooo stupid(not u)!the fact that ppl would make such a stupid story that has nothing........... and i mean nothing!! grrr! anyway i love ur fic and u should do...if u mind u should do one of koga and kagome like that! that would be soo funny!....unless u like that couple.... anyway thx for the great story!!! bye!
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 14:20 CDT
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...that...was a little weird...but yet...it WAS FUNNY!
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