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Reviewed By: MsAnimeLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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@_@ PUH-LEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I need closure...I need to see the happily ever after! I didn't mean to sound so harsh on the prev rvw, but I was really upset that you were considering terminating this project. Please, please, please continue. Thank you for all the work you've put into this. So whaddayasay?
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Reviewed By: Gryphaena On: December 04, 2005 11:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one of the most enjoyable Rin/Sesshoumaru stories I have ever read! I have no complaints at all, although I wonder where Lord Kazuo is. Jaken and Ah-Un better be okay and Sesshoumaru should heal. I don't think that he should have Kasumi as his mate. Fate doesn't want it to happen because of all those interruptions. Was Sesshoumaru's mother also a treasure or is it only Rin? I hope you continue your fabulous story!
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Title: !!!!!
Reviewed By: Trowa_9292 On: November 25, 2005 03:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! OMG OMG OMG OMG OMFG noooooo how could you!!!! i have to know what happens. of all of the cliffies i have read (a lot) that it the bigest cliffhanger of all!!!! P.S if u dont update i'll kill you......jk....but seriously, please update
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: November 23, 2005 14:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey ^^ please hurry up and update!! =D i cant wait to see what happens
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Reviewed By: moshineko On: November 22, 2005 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply Amazing!! My mind is spinning...Holy Hell as another fan put it-yes, that excatly.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: November 22, 2005 06:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an awesome chapter. It kept me at the edge of my seat. I that Sess does not dies?!! I will be cross if he does. For some reason I do not trust that demon that Rin is bethrothed (sp) too. I have a feeling he is involved in these mysterious demons that is trying to kill Sesshoumaru. Update this awesome story soon.
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Title: Holy Hell!!
Reviewed By: Shizuka Ishimaru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 05:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAH!! HOLY HEEEELL!! PLEASE tell me you didn't just kill off Sesshoumaru... in fact, I BEG YOU!! PLEEEEASE tell me he isn't dead!! @_@ *gasps, and bursts into uncontrollable tears* Angst! ARGH!! I love your work, but that was just plain scary. I can't think of anything else to say other than... HOLY HELL!!!
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Reviewed By: sdfjk On: November 07, 2005 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lovc your fic please don't pull it it's REALLY cool!!It's one of the best fic's I've read so far, and it's original so you should at least finish it!!
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Reviewed By: kaneasimi On: November 05, 2005 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful fic. So creative-great insight into Sesshoumaur's past-like no other. Please keep writing! PS: Your fanart is great too.
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Reviewed By: MsAnimeLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 12:57 CST
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I cannot believe that you are going to leave us hanging. I am aware of the hard work you put into the fic, but, please don't quit b/c of low reviews. What about the fans that have reviewed?! We are awaiting the conclusion. I have thoroughly enjoyed the fic and now I you're just going to stop...JUST LIKE THAT. Obviously, we weren't enough encouragement to keep it going. Well, this has taught me another lesson. I will try to stay away from fics that are not already completed. I will keep you on my fav list, to see if you ever decide to complete it.
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Reviewed By: chickenlover2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's all too good. I'm hoping beyond hope that you don't leave me on that cliff hanger for all eternity. I love the way the story isn't strictly romance and the hints of some evil lurking somewhere. I feel so sad for Kazuo and his lost love. Perhaps he can win her back somehow? I had never thought too deeply on how Sesshoumaru might have reacted to his mother's death. (If she had died and if he had known her...(in the series)) But I like what you wrote as his reaction. Thank you very much for writing this wonderful story. I hope you continue. Buh-By^-^
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Reviewed By: DarkDemonHuntress [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 15:09 CDT
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o man please update. i love this story and i want to know wut happens next!
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Reviewed By: MsAnimeLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 20:45 CDT
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Excellent!! The story has a great plot. The characters, especially Rin, are well developed. You've entwined emotion to a usally serious Seshy. I really like that he's still in character, but with some warmth. Ofcourse, Rin is out of character, however, she have aged maturely and beautifully. You've provided explicit sex without the smut. I have thoroughly enjoyed this fic and will submit another review after its been completed. I'm anxiously awaiting the rest.
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Reviewed By: sarahcant08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 22:24 CDT
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ok write another chapter already...i feel that i have waited long enough
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Reviewed By: WhiteLight On: October 04, 2005 22:51 CDT
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This story deserves to be nominated but someone already beat me to it!!! Good Luck cause this story so deserves recognition plus i think your an awesome writer :>. I particulary likedthey way you've potrayed Rin (sometimes they make her sound stupid, ignorant and simple but you've gotten away from that trap and now she is a bit more kick ass). Anyway keep up the most excellent work and a final goodluck for the awards!
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