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Title: Delicious and comfortable
Reviewed By: Horong [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 09:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool!! The way Miroku asks for every move he makes makes any reader go hard! *lol*! Yes, I was so worried that he'll just say :" I wanna fuck" and ruin the mood of the whole story. This is awesome!! Love you! Kisses and BDSM
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Reviewed By: JadeWriter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 01:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice story, I really enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: Rebecca O. On: July 11, 2005 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good but it's kind of hard to read after Unforseen Obstacles. It makes sense that Miroku would like pain otherwise why would he like it so much when Sango slaps him. He and Sesshomaru love each other so much though in the other story it's kind of hard imagining Sesshy using Miroku so cruelly even if he likes it. Even so I enjoyed it very much, thank you.
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 03:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was different, and quite HOT!! Great job on expressing Miroku's need to be with the youkai. How he asked for every movement made ect. Nicely done!!*spanks damn spam code..*
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