"My One and Only, Inuyasha" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: missbritt Reviewed By: missbritt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 18:22 CDT Comment/Review: i like it its good so far you should keep it up ok i cant wait to read what happens next ;)
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Reviewed By: kittycat p On: June 26, 2005 18:57 CDT Comment/Review: please write more. put in it that kagome wakes up & finds the note & runs down the stairs hoping he is still there to find him gone & her mother crying. why not if not make it really sound good about how sad she is & make she her & inuyasha get back together when he tells her how he really feels. if you use any of my ideas please write me at kittypanther603@yahoo.com with how i can type my stories & where i can reach you at. thank you for the inspiration.please type back.
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