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Title: Intruiging...
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've followed this story for quite some time, but only now realized that I haven't ever reviewed it! My bad. o.o I really like it. I like the very realistic spin you give it. Considering the series and their personalities, it's easy to see them at least trying to be together at some time, but you don't give it the sugar-coated wishful-thinking point of view that alot of other writers (including myself) write them in. It's bold, daring, risque, and blatenly sizzling. I love it. I wish you the best of luck in continuing this fic as I'm dying to read more of it. ^_^ NekuYasha
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Reviewed By: Kira_Kirke [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fic ^^ The relationship between Heero and Relena not being easy, their slow way of getting together in more ways than sex. Please, write more and update. ^___^
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Reviewed By: nicky-chan On: August 20, 2005 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whenever Heero is about to express something whether by his words or his eyes, you get this feeling of breathless anticipation: Would he break her heart or leave her speechless? No wonder Relena is still intrigued by the guy no matter how difficult he is to have a relationship with. :) You have really gotten their characters right. Not an easy feat to achieve, but since you've been a long-time fan it's not surprising. Keep up the good work!!! :) :)
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Reviewed By: Bellanotte321-ff.net On: August 19, 2005 16:20 CDT
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Very well done.. oh, where to start. I love the numerous comparisons throughout the chapter to describe little things such as expressions etc. I thought right near the middle of this story (3 or so) that maybe the constant dissecting of love would get to me, but the way that you show both characters' 'insecurities' through the conversations is awesome. Very well done :)
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Reviewed By: Iris Anthe On: August 16, 2005 12:41 CDT
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Whoo-HOO!!!! Oh Baby! I come back online after two months away and I'm greeted by a new story with four fabulous chapters already up by my all time favorite author!!!! Life is SOOOOOOOOOOOO good! Zap, this is AWESOME! Holy canoli! You've REALLY hit it on the head this time, after your seven years of pondering these two and their crazy relationship. Whew, and what a read too! I am SO hooked. I can't tell what I want more, another chapter of FMS or Amour!!!! What's a fangirl to DO???? By the way, last night, in a fit of coming down off my Zapenstap high, I decided it was time to reread Heart of the Sword again in its entirety. It took me four hours of eyepopping screenviewing in the dark and it was still a fantastic story. Damion Raveneere is still my favorite original character right next to Nightheart's in that awesome alternate universe story she never finished. *sigh* I humbly and twitchily await more of ANYTHING from you. Love, love, love!!! --Iris ^_^ PS I posted this on the ML, but I thought you'd like to have it up here too! ^_~
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Title: another great chapter
Reviewed By: nicky-chan On: August 13, 2005 07:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very insightful as usual. :) Since watching an anime only gets us so far into the characters minds, this is especially enjoyable to read. there were some dragging parts though. Please update soon. :)
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi) On: August 05, 2005 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great new chapter!! oh I can't wait to read more what will happen next. I mean I always think Heero and Relena are destined to be together. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: title?
Reviewed By: nicky-chan On: July 23, 2005 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is has a clearer understanding of how love and relationships work.
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Title: incredible
Reviewed By: heerolover315 On: July 13, 2005 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything youve written is incredible. I'm a huge fan of this pairing and im also a huge heero yuy fan as you can tell by the name ive written. I complement you and keep up the work. Those seven years have really helped you develop good writing abilities. I have read other fics from u and i personally like them all.
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Title: author
Reviewed By: o On: July 05, 2005 13:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Does this review board work? I get emails for reviews that aren't there.
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Reviewed By: Chicka On: July 05, 2005 11:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maybe that Gregory guy could give Relena what she needs. She deserves to be happy and it dosen't seem as though Heero will ever be able to admit he has any feelings for her. I also loved the image of Heero in a Pilot's uniform it just seemed so. . .perfect. Can't wait for Chapter 4. Loved this Chappie.
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Reviewed By: axel720 On: July 04, 2005 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE this chapter! its a bit sad at the end though =( damnit why does heero always have to be such a jerk >=(
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Reviewed By: Moorley On: June 29, 2005 04:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Even though it may e a while until you update i will be checking in to see how this story progresses between the two. *Adds to favourite list*
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Reviewed By: axel720 On: June 27, 2005 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome!!!^^ i love your stories, this is a good change from desires of the heart ^.~ cant wait till you update!! PS: not that this is a big deal, but there were lots of parts in the story when you mixed up 'he' with 'she' or 'his' with 'hers', a bit confusing, but not hard to figure out =P
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Reviewed By: BUBBLEWRAP01 On: June 27, 2005 08:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that i've stunmbled on such a great story! I think that the story, the sex, everything! Is simply amazing. It would be great if Relena actually did find someone else in this story. Just to see if they stuck to their word. Or even vice-versa, Heero with someone else. No strings attached can get a complicated without meaning to sometimes. I can't wait for chapter 3 i hope it dosen't take too long. Great story!
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