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| "Amour" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Title: Amazing! *tear*
Reviewed By: Dott On: May 20, 2010 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my.... O.o seriously, i cried! i loved, LOVED, every minute of it! plz PLZ PLZ!!! Continue, this is one of the most AMAZING stories i've ever read!so much passion, emotion, tragity and love, *sigh* really your work is amazing i can't tell you enough how much i loved it ^__^ plz continue, i'll have something to look forward to. Much Luv --Dott
| Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 01:38 CDT
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I had to read it (again XD). I hope you manage an update some time soon, I absolutely love this story. Definately one of my all time favourites.
| Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 04:17 CDT
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Another amazing chapter! It's always so exciting when I get the MM update e-mail for this story. I love, love Heero and Relena and I love your style, your way of portraying them in a realistic way. Their chemistry is fantastic, and the way you wrote Heero with his son was so nice to read. But what a predicament!! >< I'm glad you never take the easy way out of things! Update soon!
| Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, that chapter was soooo worth the wait! That lemon is one of the BEST lemons I have EVER read! Gods, seeing the penetration, *calm my breathing, yeah, right*. But this pregnancy has me in an upheaval! Gods, the angst and agony! I could easily see the one side where Relena just tells Calhoun, hey I got pregnant and the father's in a bit of a mess right now, so could you kindly be a public substitute for just a wee bit? Based on how you've described Calhoun so far, I'd bet he'd go for it, especially if he got some action with Relena on the side (I mean, she is already pregnant...) But then again, the angst would get pitched out the window with that scenario. So I suppose the only option is for her to marry him permanently, be miserable for the rest of her life, and have Heero be suicidal on his return, right? I seriously don't see Heero touching her if she's married to another man ever again. I am VERY interested to see how you handle this situation. Obviously a great deal of misery awaits us in these next few, dark chapters, eh? Keep up the great work and don't wait a year to update next time, k? :)
| Title: Yay!!!
Reviewed By: heeropeacecraft [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Zap! Hip hip hooray!!! ^_^ I'm so happy. That was quite a chapter. I honestly didn't think you were going to bring pregnancy into this equation. Somehow, both you and Heero had gotten me comfortable with the whole, in and out of Relena's life with no outward telltale signs thing. NOW what's going to happen? Is she going to have to STAY with Calhoun during the pregnancy? I'm sure Heero would figure out what's going on; he's pretty clever. Heads up on pregancy... pregnant women physically and psychologically NEED to be touched while pregnant. They go a bit off kilter if no-one is touching them at all. Mind you, sex is generally NOT on the agenda, but a simple hug or caress makes all the difference. Maybe Candace Mae would know that. Also, underlying fears, even ones that you thought had been totally dealt with and done with, can resurface in very ugly ways while pregnant. Also, the ability to read goes tragically out the window, as well as people's names, telephone numbers, and navigational abilities. At some point in the third trimester, every pregnant woman has a moment when she realizes she's not driving as well as she knows she used to be able to. Also, first time mothers with no real exposure to children in their lives, will focus on the fetus, and the birth and not even for a moment get their minds around the concept of holding the baby in their arms afterwards. Their connection to the baby is to the fetus, not the child to be. Also, fear of birth can be pressed aside for the entire nine months, but without any real experience or training, or honesty with herself, a pregnant woman can be completely terrified when the time comes. Birthing can be terrifying. Okay, I have no idea why I just gave you a lecture on the pitfalls of pregnancy here. But, your stories are all so great and I don't recall you ever approaching pregnancy before and I just want you to be prepared so your writing can remain at a high level. I love this story and I look forward to reading more. More FMS too!!! Lots of love, Iris ^_^
| Title: axel720
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 05:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just when I had lost hope! Amazing! Thank you! Awesome chapter and extremely interesting turn of events. You have me so excited about this fic all over again!! I love love love it! Absolutely intense, your style has me in a death grip and I can't wait to see what happens with our beloved couple. I love their interactions, and the fact that there is very little dialogue but I hang on every word they say. You're great at keeping them in character, and you make me love Heero so much more somehow! This new turn of events should stir some commotion in our Gundam Pilot's heart, I'd love to see his point of view on this. I'm waiting -as patiently as possible- for your next promising chapter. Thanks for updating!
| Title: Chapter 7... again and again and again
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 06:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another unfinished fiction which I've re-read countless times in my favorites list... Over the past year, I somehow managed to convince myself, rather unsatisfactorily, that I suppose the way Chapter 7 ends could be a possible ending, but then my eyes hit that bloody TBC... *sigh* So then now, at 4 AM in the morning, having re-read this fic most desperately again, I've broken down to more-than-likely, uselessly, beg for more of this fantastic piece of beautiful fiction. It's been over one year since you've updated... that should be the maximum, right? ;P
| Title: axel720
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 09:56 CST
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Ah, I had to read through it again. And I still love it. Reading through it just made me more desperate to see an update >< Are you going to continue the story?
| Title: axel720
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU'RE BAAACK!! YAY! i missed this fic SO much, i love it! ill be keeping a close watch for updates! keep up the awesome work ^^
| Title: Intruiging...
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've followed this story for quite some time, but only now realized that I haven't ever reviewed it! My bad. o.o I really like it. I like the very realistic spin you give it. Considering the series and their personalities, it's easy to see them at least trying to be together at some time, but you don't give it the sugar-coated wishful-thinking point of view that alot of other writers (including myself) write them in. It's bold, daring, risque, and blatenly sizzling. I love it. I wish you the best of luck in continuing this fic as I'm dying to read more of it. ^_^ NekuYasha
| Reviewed By: Kira_Kirke [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fic ^^ The relationship between Heero and Relena not being easy, their slow way of getting together in more ways than sex. Please, write more and update. ^___^
| Reviewed By: nicky-chan On: August 20, 2005 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whenever Heero is about to express something whether by his words or his eyes, you get this feeling of breathless anticipation: Would he break her heart or leave her speechless? No wonder Relena is still intrigued by the guy no matter how difficult he is to have a relationship with. :) You have really gotten their characters right. Not an easy feat to achieve, but since you've been a long-time fan it's not surprising. Keep up the good work!!! :) :)
| Reviewed By: Bellanotte321-ff.net On: August 19, 2005 16:20 CDT
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Very well done.. oh, where to start. I love the numerous comparisons throughout the chapter to describe little things such as expressions etc. I thought right near the middle of this story (3 or so) that maybe the constant dissecting of love would get to me, but the way that you show both characters' 'insecurities' through the conversations is awesome. Very well done :)
| Reviewed By: Iris Anthe On: August 16, 2005 12:41 CDT
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Whoo-HOO!!!! Oh Baby! I come back online after two months away and I'm greeted by a new story with four fabulous chapters already up by my all time favorite author!!!! Life is SOOOOOOOOOOOO good! Zap, this is AWESOME! Holy canoli! You've REALLY hit it on the head this time, after your seven years of pondering these two and their crazy relationship. Whew, and what a read too! I am SO hooked. I can't tell what I want more, another chapter of FMS or Amour!!!! What's a fangirl to DO???? By the way, last night, in a fit of coming down off my Zapenstap high, I decided it was time to reread Heart of the Sword again in its entirety. It took me four hours of eyepopping screenviewing in the dark and it was still a fantastic story. Damion Raveneere is still my favorite original character right next to Nightheart's in that awesome alternate universe story she never finished. *sigh* I humbly and twitchily await more of ANYTHING from you. Love, love, love!!! --Iris ^_^ PS I posted this on the ML, but I thought you'd like to have it up here too! ^_~
| Title: another great chapter
Reviewed By: nicky-chan On: August 13, 2005 07:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very insightful as usual. :) Since watching an anime only gets us so far into the characters minds, this is especially enjoyable to read. there were some dragging parts though. Please update soon. :)
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