| "Naota Is Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: DeepBlue1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tsk tsk. Its good yes but alot of making out...and maybe that would happen in an episode one day and eveyrone will be shocked beyond compare but for now thats my rating. Very sorry.
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Title: Please write more
Reviewed By: Kiwi Ninamori [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good stuff-_^I love your style, your a promising writer, you can bet your on my favs list^_^I wish someone would read some off my work, Class Is Out(Naruto) and Always All My Love(Naruto)
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Reviewed By: Yo? On: September 11, 2005 14:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
*Holds gun to your head* UPDATE, NOW!
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Reviewed By: luckyguy On: August 23, 2005 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay....it was kinda good, definitly original...not the kind of story im used too,and im sorry to say I think it is a little messed up, but overall it was pretty good and definatly worth reading.
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Reviewed By: un named On: August 04, 2005 14:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
please up date soon this is sooo good
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Reviewed By: Darthemed On: July 31, 2005 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Much better than any of the other FLCL lemons on MM. I look forward to the next few chapters, since your style of dirtying up the characters is promising. :)
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Reviewed By: maoloch On: July 29, 2005 22:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope to read more soon
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Reviewed By: unnamed On: July 02, 2005 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this add more. i can't wait to see what he dose to the other woman
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Title: i'm surprised no one has reviewed this yet
Reviewed By: damien_black On: June 30, 2005 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a pretty good fanfic so far. I'm surprised that no one has reviewed this yet. I'm impressed. This is actually the 1st FLCL fanfic i read. Keep up the good work.
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