Reviewed By:solace_no_tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2001 18:59 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: The grammer isn't too good and your style of writing script form isn't very appealing. You could improve by reading some of the other authors' work. The characters are only a little OOC which is still okay, but try not to make them too OOC. But, Congratulations for coming up with an original fic! I haven't seen anything like this before.
P.S: The so-called 'Lasin Board' is actually called a compass in China and Japan.
