| "A Brief Christmas Comedy" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 02, 2002 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I think I'm losing it. I thought I r/r but I guess I forgot to do the latter. Anyway, I think you did a great job of keeping Veggie in character. It wouldn't have worked any other way. I can't believe that Bulma could confuse the two but I guess it was wishful thinking on her part that Veggie would actually put on the suit. Great job KN! |
Reviewed By: Meow On: June 17, 2002 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was really great! Yes I thought you did a very good job of keepeing Vegeta in character and you're RIGHT he would never EVER wear that...not in a gizillion years. Thanks for not making him look like an idiot. OOCness bothers the heck out of me, and believe it or not if you had put him in that suit, I may have been annoyed enough to stop reading. *gasp* But you are clever! Making me think it was Vegeta when it was really Yamcha. lol! I wasn't expecting that at all. Anyways, a nice ending. Alls well that ends well...and all that..um yea..o-O;; I really enjoyed this. Fantastic job! This story deseveres WAY more reviews than this.. WHAT'S THE MATTER WITH YOU PEOPLE? Don't you know a good story when you read one? *rants for awhile and then calms down* Oh well, I think I've rambled long enough...I'll be quiet now. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2001 02:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so good! There is nothing like a sweet Vegeta to make a girls holiday. Oh, and thanks for all he great reviews you gave my stories, they made my day. V/B 4 Life. Merry Christmas!! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2001 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute and funny? I couldn't ask for more. I can't wait and see how Bulma gets our dear Veggie-chan into the big red suit. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 18, 2001 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, I can just about imagine Veggie in that suit, his hat will be sticking straight up because of his hair. Let's not forget about his little "attitude problem"-more like Scrooge than Santa. Anyway, can't wait to see how this whole thing turns out. Hurry up with the next chapter, please? |
