"New Teen, New Feelings" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: S.G. On: August 25, 2005 13:28 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: :D That was hilarious! I liked the chapter. Who knew that Rollex didn't know how to use a washer or dryer? That was funny. Keep it up! Yes! No practice today! No game tommorrow! Yes!:D
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Title: Chapter 2 Reviewed By: saxyguy On: August 02, 2005 18:20 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I enjoyed it. Thanks. Just a side note: There are some punctuation marks missing in the chapter. See you at practice Thursday!
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Reviewed By: saxyguy On: July 29, 2005 21:40 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is a great fanfic. Plz, I'm anxious to know what Ch. 2 brings.
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Title: Um Reviewed By: inuluvsu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 07:32 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I thought is was really good, all the characters seemed to be cannon, and your description on your original (has bad memory) chracter was amazing, I can't do description. It was very interesting but it makes me wonder, as much as I love Terra, Beast Boy and Terra forever, how is she back is this before she turned into a stone or did they some how bring her back? if so tell. Ok good story Update please!!!!!!1
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