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Reviewed By: Weeky Lord On: October 01, 2007 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO you Must finish the Story I Demand it... (weep) Please?!... Come on Ill be your best friend... Ill give you a dollar... Ill... ummm... be forced to send you a giant box of candy that will cost me a hundred dollars to send to you! So come on write the next chapter. Or else who knows what will happen.
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Reviewed By: Weeky Lord On: October 01, 2007 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am enjoying myself greatly reading this. I is witty, exceedingly humorous, and just alot of fun to read. And the sexual overtone just adds another level of interest, but it could go with or without, and Im sure the story and the writting would be wonderful either way. Well Im on chapter two right now, so Im going to post this and get back to my reading, cant wait to see what happens. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Twinny On: October 23, 2006 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it!! Please update soon or else........
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Title: FFRG Review (Ch 1)
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 00:06 CDT
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First off be consistent. The first part of this is written in script format, not a typically accepted format in Fan Fiction, unless it is original work and you're planning on making an actual movie/play. Though movie spoofs can be enjoyable this isn't written like one. I would suggest switching to full narrative, as well a beta reader would get rid of a lot of the spelling and grammar errors. (Kagome is a name and needs to be capitalized) Otherwise this looks like it can become either a full blow hentai or a fun spoof, keep writing, editing and thanks for submitting to FFRG.
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Title: The Janitor
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 16:31 CDT
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YAaayyy^_^
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Reviewed By: blazingnymph7 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nothing beats a good sugar high huh? so, whats the deal with kaggy's mom and Death? By the way Hiei should have his chance at mischief... one cant deny his true nature >:) oh, and cant want wait until the next chappy. Toddoloo...
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update ASAP!!! GREAT STORY!!! it 1 of the BEST!!!
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Reviewed By: lover girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 14:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
niiiice. I like their revenge, who knows it just might come in handy. But when are you going to up-date?
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Title: The Janitor
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 02:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: natsumi_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 13:57 CST
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Reviewed By: natsumi_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 13:57 CST
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This is hilarious so far! I love this story! ^___^ And se? I'm keeping my word! *lol*
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Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 20:37 CDT
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still trying to see them
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 22:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
update!!
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Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 20:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I will read my reviews!
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