| "One Time" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: xYour_Last_Chancex [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soooo wait...let me get this straight....they Kag&Inu did IT in Kag's little brothers room? Im sry but thats wrong...otherwise...it was...okay
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Title: One Time
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 15:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: One Time
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 22:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Lucient not logged in On: June 28, 2005 20:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
RYN: Mantis began as a retelling of a true story between me and a couple of lost loves... I'm glad to know it made you think, although I must admit I am afraid of the thoughts. ;) I liked how sweet this story was, and how much everyone stayed in character. I think it's very important to keep the characters unchanging from Rumiko's vision, unless otherwise specified ((AU or OOC)). I love the quality time they spent together playing the game. It cracked me up. I can see Inuyasha being a sore loser.
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