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Reviewed By: Ryeka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2009 20:07 CST
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i was curious to know if you planned on updating this? you can contact me at littleayeka(at)hotmail(dot)com
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Reviewed By: WCInsane On: August 07, 2007 06:48 CDT
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WOW...I remember reading this back in december of last year I think and it's still as good now as it was then. I think I may have even enjoyed it more now...although I hope this isn't dead and that you do have more somewhere...please?
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Title: Interesting... (Chapters 1-9)
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 18:54 CDT
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I definitely think this is an interesting and creative work of fiction. I like how you've weaved the world and made it believable. The only problems I can see are the really short chapters and as a result the story seems rushed. Other than the short chapters, I suggest using more detail in your descriptions. It's definitely quaint and cute at times with hints of a feral amorous quality. I do hope you come back to writing soon since I think this has potential. I hope you update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 00:54 CST
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UPDATE!!!!!!! pwease? I need to get in touch with you about thing that have happened... unless I alread did... I honestly can't remember
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 14:22 CST
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HELP NITA!!! I keep getting bowled over by my sissy's dog Diesal. Save me!! He's a huge English mastiff and I love him and everything but sometimes agghhh! By the way, it is easy to get along with Heero in this fic isn't it? Usually he's so cold. It's nice to seen him all kind and adorable.
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Reviewed By: MeefMonster Rides Again! On: December 26, 2006 00:41 CST
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*tackles and hugs* heay girl, glad to see you working on this one again ..happy holidays and may your new year be joyful
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Reviewed By: Firyn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 23:28 CST
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YYYYYAAAAAAYYYYY!!!!! Finally! I've been waiting for ages for this!!!! Thanks so much! Merry Christmas!
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Reviewed By: ip On: November 27, 2006 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with Firyn! PLEASE update!!!
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Reviewed By: Firyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 16:37 CST
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PLEASE!!!! PLEASE!!! PLease!!!!! You have to update this!!!!!!! Don't let it be a dead story when it's soooooo goood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! There is so much potential with this story and it's so sweet, so please update it. It's been way too long.
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Title: Halfbreed
Reviewed By: tyleet88 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 18:13 CDT
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Heyyyy this is a cute fic...I hope you keep this up, plzzzzz hope to see an update soon ..:D hugs
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Reviewed By: dragonborn_crystal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 06:53 CDT
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hey, just want to say this is really good and i hope you update it soon. You're on my favourite's list so i definatly won't be missing it. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 01:02 CST
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aw... a nice relena? without obsession? What is the world coming to?
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Reviewed By: LEEMAX^_^ On: November 12, 2005 20:33 CST
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Yes like like like (shake head up and down)more more soon soon. Ppppppppppppppwwwwwwweeeeeeeaaaaaasssssssssssssseeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: halfbreed
Reviewed By: cybrogtora On: November 12, 2005 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! I was sure this story had died! I'm so happy I kept it on my update alert!:) Even though it was short, I'm just glade for another chapter! I am curious about two things. In the chapter as Duo was sneaking back in the manor, you said that his scent was carried on the wind. If that's so, wouldn't the gruades smell him? And are the others pilots going to be coming in too? quarterhorse_2525@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Crazeme On: October 12, 2005 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please..please...please...pretty, pretty please continue this story. I can hardly wait to find out what happens. Update soon.
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