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Reviewed By: Ryeka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2009 20:07 CST
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i was curious to know if you planned on updating this? you can contact me at littleayeka(at)hotmail(dot)com
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Reviewed By: WCInsane On: August 07, 2007 06:48 CDT
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WOW...I remember reading this back in december of last year I think and it's still as good now as it was then. I think I may have even enjoyed it more now...although I hope this isn't dead and that you do have more somewhere...please?
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Title: Interesting... (Chapters 1-9)
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 18:54 CDT
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I definitely think this is an interesting and creative work of fiction. I like how you've weaved the world and made it believable. The only problems I can see are the really short chapters and as a result the story seems rushed. Other than the short chapters, I suggest using more detail in your descriptions. It's definitely quaint and cute at times with hints of a feral amorous quality. I do hope you come back to writing soon since I think this has potential. I hope you update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 00:54 CST
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UPDATE!!!!!!! pwease? I need to get in touch with you about thing that have happened... unless I alread did... I honestly can't remember
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 14:22 CST
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HELP NITA!!! I keep getting bowled over by my sissy's dog Diesal. Save me!! He's a huge English mastiff and I love him and everything but sometimes agghhh! By the way, it is easy to get along with Heero in this fic isn't it? Usually he's so cold. It's nice to seen him all kind and adorable.
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Reviewed By: MeefMonster Rides Again! On: December 26, 2006 00:41 CST
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*tackles and hugs* heay girl, glad to see you working on this one again ..happy holidays and may your new year be joyful
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Reviewed By: Firyn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 23:28 CST
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YYYYYAAAAAAYYYYY!!!!! Finally! I've been waiting for ages for this!!!! Thanks so much! Merry Christmas!
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Reviewed By: ip On: November 27, 2006 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with Firyn! PLEASE update!!!
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Reviewed By: Firyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 16:37 CST
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PLEASE!!!! PLEASE!!! PLease!!!!! You have to update this!!!!!!! Don't let it be a dead story when it's soooooo goood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! There is so much potential with this story and it's so sweet, so please update it. It's been way too long.
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Title: Halfbreed
Reviewed By: tyleet88 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 18:13 CDT
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Heyyyy this is a cute fic...I hope you keep this up, plzzzzz hope to see an update soon ..:D hugs
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Reviewed By: dragonborn_crystal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 06:53 CDT
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hey, just want to say this is really good and i hope you update it soon. You're on my favourite's list so i definatly won't be missing it. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 01:02 CST
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aw... a nice relena? without obsession? What is the world coming to?
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Reviewed By: LEEMAX^_^ On: November 12, 2005 20:33 CST
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Yes like like like (shake head up and down)more more soon soon. Ppppppppppppppwwwwwwweeeeeeeaaaaaasssssssssssssseeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: halfbreed
Reviewed By: cybrogtora On: November 12, 2005 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! I was sure this story had died! I'm so happy I kept it on my update alert!:) Even though it was short, I'm just glade for another chapter! I am curious about two things. In the chapter as Duo was sneaking back in the manor, you said that his scent was carried on the wind. If that's so, wouldn't the gruades smell him? And are the others pilots going to be coming in too? quarterhorse_2525@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Crazeme On: October 12, 2005 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please..please...please...pretty, pretty please continue this story. I can hardly wait to find out what happens. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 22:10 CDT
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EWWW! Icky J! Burn you evil bastard burn!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 16:53 CDT
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Yea!!! Duo's back.. but all his innocence is gone?!... so J didn't....*gags* he couldn't have?! Please say it isn't so... *sniffles* meidaminer didn't send me the notice that you updated *whines* what's happening?! pooh anyways update soon, real soon ok?
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Reviewed By: camillian On: August 09, 2005 03:41 CDT
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question, is duo j's chosen mate or have they been together for awhile? how's heero going to have to deal with all this? update again soon!
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Title: Oopps
Reviewed By: Nanashi1 On: August 08, 2005 09:36 CDT
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First I would like to say thank you for trying to fix the fic so we can read your great writing. Second the Whole chapter did not show up just the disclamier and the title.
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Title: You reposted
Reviewed By: Nanashi1 On: August 07, 2005 18:32 CDT
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I am sorry to tell you this but it seems you reposted Chapter 6 as Chapter 7. Besides that I enjoy your works and can't wait to read the hopefully right chapter soon. Nanashi
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: LILLAmn On: July 30, 2005 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weally, Weally like this! Hope U update soon cuz I weally love youw stowy!
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Reviewed By: priscel *whines* On: July 27, 2005 15:08 CDT
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i didn't receive the email that you updated *whines some more* 13 isn't that early... I know some that started at 12 and what a place to leave it!! *pouts* update again reallly sooon!!!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: July 27, 2005 12:39 CDT
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so what will happen next? update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Crazeme On: July 27, 2005 07:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And???? *wags tongue expectantly* This just keeps getting better and better. I think this fic is just adorable. You've captured Duo in all of his sweet innocence and Heero in his protective save my love mode. Keep going. Very Good and totally captivating.
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Reviewed By: camillian On: July 25, 2005 15:20 CDT
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hmmm...... so i'm guessing that duo and heero don't know how to get cubs right? what's happening now and will this be the start of their new adventure? update again soon!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 24, 2005 23:52 CDT
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 24, 2005 23:26 CDT Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I can't find the words to say just how great this story is .So I just thought I would rate it a perfect 10..Please update.
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Reviewed By: MeefMonster On: July 21, 2005 21:53 CDT
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aww poor Duo..he got cramps *pets* i know how that can feel lovy... *snuggles all around* anyway...Kix wants me to tell you how i broke his glasses personaly as part of my pennance. well..i was feeling extra frisky the other night.. and kix was soo damed sexy in his new leather pants *drools* well to make a long story short*looks appoligeticaly at Kix* instead of gently taking off his glasses and setting them on the bed befor pouncing him, like i should have, i flung them off and they hit the wall.*begs to Kix, Forgive me lovy?* (Kix glares "not yet baby." as he holds up a paddle, " you still have 3 more to go") *Meef epps and scurries off to finish her pennance*
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Reviewed By: animeloverss On: July 21, 2005 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is so cool that is quite enjoyable to read and it kind of fun when they learn to live like kid thanks got to write more more thanks
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Reviewed By: emerald eyes On: July 20, 2005 14:48 CDT
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wrestling is fun! so what's going on with duo (although i have an idea....)? update again soon and let the cuteness continue on! will heero or duo be embarassed by the changes?
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Reviewed By: priscel _ =^_^= On: July 20, 2005 01:37 CDT
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*knocks on turtle shell* hey in there? more story!! more story!! more story please! *squeals* i think i know what's up with Duo, but how old are they now? h-12, d-11?
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