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Title: You reposted
Reviewed By: Nanashi1 On: August 07, 2005 18:32 CDT
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I am sorry to tell you this but it seems you reposted Chapter 6 as Chapter 7. Besides that I enjoy your works and can't wait to read the hopefully right chapter soon. Nanashi
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: LILLAmn On: July 30, 2005 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weally, Weally like this! Hope U update soon cuz I weally love youw stowy!
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Reviewed By: priscel *whines* On: July 27, 2005 15:08 CDT
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i didn't receive the email that you updated *whines some more* 13 isn't that early... I know some that started at 12 and what a place to leave it!! *pouts* update again reallly sooon!!!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: July 27, 2005 12:39 CDT
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so what will happen next? update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Crazeme On: July 27, 2005 07:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And???? *wags tongue expectantly* This just keeps getting better and better. I think this fic is just adorable. You've captured Duo in all of his sweet innocence and Heero in his protective save my love mode. Keep going. Very Good and totally captivating.
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Reviewed By: camillian On: July 25, 2005 15:20 CDT
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hmmm...... so i'm guessing that duo and heero don't know how to get cubs right? what's happening now and will this be the start of their new adventure? update again soon!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 24, 2005 23:52 CDT
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 24, 2005 23:26 CDT Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I can't find the words to say just how great this story is .So I just thought I would rate it a perfect 10..Please update.
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Reviewed By: MeefMonster On: July 21, 2005 21:53 CDT
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aww poor Duo..he got cramps *pets* i know how that can feel lovy... *snuggles all around* anyway...Kix wants me to tell you how i broke his glasses personaly as part of my pennance. well..i was feeling extra frisky the other night.. and kix was soo damed sexy in his new leather pants *drools* well to make a long story short*looks appoligeticaly at Kix* instead of gently taking off his glasses and setting them on the bed befor pouncing him, like i should have, i flung them off and they hit the wall.*begs to Kix, Forgive me lovy?* (Kix glares "not yet baby." as he holds up a paddle, " you still have 3 more to go") *Meef epps and scurries off to finish her pennance*
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Reviewed By: animeloverss On: July 21, 2005 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is so cool that is quite enjoyable to read and it kind of fun when they learn to live like kid thanks got to write more more thanks
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Reviewed By: emerald eyes On: July 20, 2005 14:48 CDT
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wrestling is fun! so what's going on with duo (although i have an idea....)? update again soon and let the cuteness continue on! will heero or duo be embarassed by the changes?
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Reviewed By: priscel _ =^_^= On: July 20, 2005 01:37 CDT
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*knocks on turtle shell* hey in there? more story!! more story!! more story please! *squeals* i think i know what's up with Duo, but how old are they now? h-12, d-11?
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 22:47 CDT
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what the fuck???????
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Reviewed By: emerald eyes On: July 19, 2005 12:02 CDT
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duo and heero are both so cute! don't make them grow up too fast! update again soon!
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Reviewed By: aljj On: July 18, 2005 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work. I loved reading please, please, please up date really soon! I want more!!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 19:52 CDT
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Interesting story...would have been able to read it better if someone *glares at MeefMonster* hadent broken my glasses the other night, so then i wouldnt have had to wear my old glasses *meef eep's and hides* good story bye.
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