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| "A Home in Common" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: JaeFire [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 02:50 CDT
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WOW, apology for the last post! I don't know what's up with MediaMiner, but I was writing a review for another fanfic, had to stop and sign in, write the review again and BAM! it's on the wrong Reviews page! And I don't know how to delete reviews I've written. So sorry! BTW, I recognize the title of this fic, and I have to say, Michalyn, I've been reading you for years and I loved this story!!!
| Reviewed By: orangeflips [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 21:46 CDT
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Beautiful, just simply wonderful. You captured the two characters just so... nyaah, I'm jealous of your talent. It was wooonderrful! :D
| Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it! update soon!
| Reviewed By: pixie smith (nsi) On: July 03, 2005 17:50 CDT
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Another, beautiful, beautiful chapter. I'm really hoping that Wufei won't choose necessity over pleasure, but considering how this *is* a 13x5, ha, ha, I'm sure he'll make the right decision. I'm glad they didn't totally jump into a relationship in the second chapter. I like the way you're nurturing it. Great work!
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 17:59 CDT
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Wonderful! Humerous and exciting. I know exactly how it feels to choose that first bra! I just loved the way you wrote Wufei's embarrassment and total confusion. I loved it and can't wait to read more!!!
| Title: AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Harmonie Des Anges [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 22:10 CDT
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You can't do this to us!!!!!! I'm already hanging on EVERY WORD of A Matter of Good Sense, and now this?! You have absolutely NO sympathy do you? Why? Why? You write so well, I can't HELP but be captivated! I love the way you wrote this, it's so sweet and so real. My father blanched too when I wanted to "talk" to him. I can still remember even though it was years ago. *sigh* You just have this amazing way of writing that touches your reader and makes them understand the hardships the characters face. Oh and those two girls, Marimeia, and...WuFei's daughter (I don't spell her name for fear of completely messing it up), would make such CUTE sisters! Oh, I can't WAIT to see where you go with this. And I really do appreciate the way you portrayed WuFei and Meiran's relationship. I think Meiran was cool in her own way and I'm so happy that you wrote her as such a positive influence in WuFei's life. I really am looking forward to the rest of this story, please update soon, on and don't forget about A Matter of Good Sense. ^_^
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