| "Colonist Labour Camp no. 125" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Krissy220 On: July 21, 2005 17:14 CDT
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Man I can't wait for you to update this one. This is such an orginal alternate universe, one that I haven't read before. You wrote it that I have interest in the littlest unknown character. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: the shell On: July 18, 2005 01:00 CDT
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I totally LOVE this fanfic. I can't wait to read the next part! I'm totally looking forward to Heero's entrance and Wufie's relationship (if there is gonna be one) with the oz officer. ^_^ please write more soon!! Your fanfic is def on my fav list. R
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Title: I'm a very happy camper
Reviewed By: thewarriorkai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 07:45 CDT
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GRINS* I like your portrayal of Duo but you got the numbers mixed slightly, when 05 is telling 04 that he'll glare him into next week you have 03 written instead of 04, it's not hard to figure out what you meant but I thought I'd let you know anyhow. I like the idea of Duo stealing their names back but when does Heero come in and is Duo, Duo's real name or is it the one he gave himself... what I mean,is what's his past exactly, or all of them... mind you if the other three get the rest of their memories back with their names we'll find some of that out soon enough, I'm really looking forward to the next part! Awesome!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 22:18 CDT
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Actually, Une is eleven... Continue
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Title: Let me think...
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 16:14 CDT
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Um... Treize is a colonel? That's different,... Let me guess... noventa is the Dictator?
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: Ricky Rick On: July 04, 2005 08:46 CDT
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Interesting. Keep on writing, babe! ^^
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Title: More please?
Reviewed By: thewarriorkai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 06:49 CDT
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Eep, poor 47 (Hilde). I was hoping that someone might intervene... at least Wufei was okay. But why did Sally get to leave? Glad it worked!!!
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Title: Ok, thanks
Reviewed By: Sandy (Sandileina) On: July 03, 2005 04:54 CDT
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Great, thankyou. I tried on my brother's computer, and it works. ^^ Thanks for the tip. Ok, back to writing the fourth chapter... I really should be doing hwk... But this is way more fun! And besides, you and thewarriorkai asked very nicely and made me feel heppy. ^____^
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Title: sometimes
Reviewed By: thewarriorkai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 04:38 CDT
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mediaminer sometimes does that to me too but I've found that you have to make sure you're logged in to get reviews and sometimes it's the computer that is the actual problem, the comp at work won't let me see past the seventh review so I have to use another computer to see the rest. As to viewing your third chapter, I can't tell you what's up with that... sorry, I hope this helps though. You can contact the people in charge, I think... I don't know, I'm pretty knew myself... sorry I wasn't much help.
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Title: Erm...
Reviewed By: Sandy (Sandileina) On: July 03, 2005 04:32 CDT
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Is Mediaminer going dodgy, or is it just me? I can't access my reviews, or my third chapter. Odd... Has anyone else noticed this? It seems to work fine for other people's fanfics, so I can read those no problem, it's just mine...
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 20:11 CDT
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BTW, it is mueller, and I love this! SO, you were thinking of the Holocaust when you wrote that comment in the first chapter? It makes sense, because Treize is just like Hitler, minus the horrid jew-hating, though the Colonists are like the Jews in this, ne? Anyhoo, it's good. Write more!
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Title: me again
Reviewed By: thewarriorkai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 11:49 CDT
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Yah!!! Duo and soooo feisty. Poor 77! I like how you describe the person so we can tell who it is... 48 (?), I can't quite remember her number, is Hilde and 11 is Noin right and then... er, was it 88(?) - hard to remember the numbers and what not when I can't really look at the story - is Sally? I really like this but now I'm curious about when Heero comes into it all. I was glad to see Duo get a few good licks in, too! Keep it up and thanks for the cookies!!!!! I love this fic.
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Title: interesting revision
Reviewed By: thewarriorkai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 10:25 CDT
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Okay, that's an interesting switch... making Quatre sick instead of the girl... makes me curious as to where you're going with it. And you still left me hanging! VERY naughty... now, if I give you the muffins and cookies and anything else that's sweet and happens to be in my kitchen, will you PLEASE write more.... pretty, pretty please?
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Reviewed By: thewarriorkai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 23:13 CDT
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*GRINS* oh, you are soooo evil! You write well though, and I do like the story idea so far... I'm REALLY intrigued by the prisoner so I'll be on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter to go up? Instead of muffins, can I get chocolate chip cookies? PWEASE????? Who is your fav. character anyway? And what kinds of pairings are you thinking about having in the story? Okay, I'll stop pestering you now. Seriously though, this looks really good and I understand how homework and everything else can get in the way of writing so I fully understand if it takes you a while to write more, when you do though - could you aim for just a little more in the chapter, er, pretty please? Okay I'm done pleading and pestering now. Thankies!!!
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: thewarriorkai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 01:48 CDT
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Okay, I'm pretty intrigued by this and I don't mean to hound you but... I'm really looking forward to more. I'm curious about who the person is who comes along and changes it... I'm also curious about where the other pilots are. Trowa you told us in this part and you mention three are in the camps so maybe two are with him but what about the other two....? I'm adding you to my favorites because I'm really curious now!
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