Reviewed By: Amavin On: June 28, 2005 18:57 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10 Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review: It sounded like a good begining, but to be perfectly honest the spelling and grammar was more distracting then anything else. I also happen to be in the opinion that InuYasha may have been more stubborn about talking about his feelings. The kiss was good, and it's what we all hope for so keep at it. Good first try.
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