"Vegeta's Day With Trunks" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Crowsi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 11:24 CDT Comment/Review: It's great, just cheak the spellings, but apart from that it's a great story. | Reviewed By: Needs help On: May 24, 2002 22:16 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10 Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review: I liked your idea even though you should have checked your spelling there were part's that couldn't be understood, i would have enjoyed the fic a bit more IF you checked your spelling, take note i'm only telling you this so it improves, sorry if i graded you down so much!
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