| "Living The Promise" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you do that. Oh I hope Kagome makes it out ok.
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Reviewed By: bk On: August 24, 2005 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow what a cliffy. I hope you update soon because I want to know if they get out safely.
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story. I hope Kagome makes it out ok. Poor Inuyasha he wooried sick. Please write a new chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 13:27 CDT
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Hey whz up! You are very welcome for my help it was fun. I love your story I think you are a very good writer. This chapter was exiciding. ( I hope I spelled that right I can't find my dictionary LOL). It is here somewhere;my place looks like a tornado hit it, LOL. Well sometime in Sept. I'll be back to help you some more until then love ya
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Title: Cliffhangers are so evil!
Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 20:12 CDT
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Oh please continue. Don't bag it now! There's nothing worse than reading through a couple of chapters to find out, HEY...there's no more! It seems like you are tackling a lot of topics at once, Kag and Inu's troubles with having children, the orphans at the home, and what is with the connection Sesh has with those two? It seems like you have many ideas, and are trying to get them all in to keep readers coming back for more, but it gets to be too much. If you need to, do a continuation with one of the topics for later in the story, and work on another one now. Please keep writing, I want to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Brittney On: August 04, 2005 15:21 CDT
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Hurry put up the next chapter!!!!!!*Grabs a pencil and throws at author* Thats for the cliffie!!!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY PlEASE UPDATE VERY SOON I"VE GOT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: inuyasha_lover5209(not signed in) On: July 21, 2005 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello...sorry i have not been helping u much...my comp has been broken and i have been ReallY BuSy!!^.^
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Title: sweet!!!!
Reviewed By: Inuchan75 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update as soon as possible this is the greatest story ever i cant wait for you to update
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Reviewed By: to lazy to sign in On: July 19, 2005 21:05 CDT
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wow whats goin to happen next..omg i cant wait to see so plz plz update soon..
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Reviewed By: night_angel007 On: July 19, 2005 21:03 CDT
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OMG YES!!!!! Finally!! ur so evil endind it like that..UPDATE PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inu_girl135 On: July 19, 2005 20:52 CDT
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wow i love this story its soo kewl u did a sequel..but omg that last chapter..what a cliffy..lol..U HAVE UPDATE...what happens to kagome???? omg so pls pls update soon
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done please update soon.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_star On: July 13, 2005 03:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, the sequel...cool!!!! Well, I hope you update real soon and by the way...YOUR STORY WAS FANTASTIC!!!!! Way to go!!! Good luck on your next chapter! and the next one, and the next one, and the next one...
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 12:11 CDT
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you are welcome I had fun, like I said I think you are a very good writer and I like helping you as much I can. I did get my management job And I wouldn't be home late (6am-4:30pm) but I would love to keep helping you if you need it thank you.
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