| "Living The Promise" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Title: Cliffhangers are so evil!
Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 20:12 CDT
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Oh please continue. Don't bag it now! There's nothing worse than reading through a couple of chapters to find out, HEY...there's no more! It seems like you are tackling a lot of topics at once, Kag and Inu's troubles with having children, the orphans at the home, and what is with the connection Sesh has with those two? It seems like you have many ideas, and are trying to get them all in to keep readers coming back for more, but it gets to be too much. If you need to, do a continuation with one of the topics for later in the story, and work on another one now. Please keep writing, I want to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Brittney On: August 04, 2005 15:21 CDT
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Hurry put up the next chapter!!!!!!*Grabs a pencil and throws at author* Thats for the cliffie!!!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY PlEASE UPDATE VERY SOON I"VE GOT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: inuyasha_lover5209(not signed in) On: July 21, 2005 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello...sorry i have not been helping u much...my comp has been broken and i have been ReallY BuSy!!^.^
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Title: sweet!!!!
Reviewed By: Inuchan75 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update as soon as possible this is the greatest story ever i cant wait for you to update
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Reviewed By: to lazy to sign in On: July 19, 2005 21:05 CDT
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wow whats goin to happen next..omg i cant wait to see so plz plz update soon..
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Reviewed By: night_angel007 On: July 19, 2005 21:03 CDT
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OMG YES!!!!! Finally!! ur so evil endind it like that..UPDATE PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inu_girl135 On: July 19, 2005 20:52 CDT
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wow i love this story its soo kewl u did a sequel..but omg that last chapter..what a cliffy..lol..U HAVE UPDATE...what happens to kagome???? omg so pls pls update soon
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done please update soon.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_star On: July 13, 2005 03:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, the sequel...cool!!!! Well, I hope you update real soon and by the way...YOUR STORY WAS FANTASTIC!!!!! Way to go!!! Good luck on your next chapter! and the next one, and the next one, and the next one...
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 12:11 CDT
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you are welcome I had fun, like I said I think you are a very good writer and I like helping you as much I can. I did get my management job And I wouldn't be home late (6am-4:30pm) but I would love to keep helping you if you need it thank you.
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Reviewed By: Kialla [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this story is really good, so far! i think that (just like your previous story) it will get 10 times better than it already is! update soon! --kialla--
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 12:51 CDT
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Hi sweety I love how this story is starting out. I know how the way Kagome feel I been tring to have a baby for at least 5yrs. Congrats about your new beta reader, I guess I was not quick enought to comform maybe next time. If you or your beta need any help you can e-mail me flyingtiger24@juno.com I would like to help if I can. Keep writing and I keep reviewing until next time. Love ya Bye
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG YES!!!!! Finally!! update update update i love it as much as the last one:P -Angel aka NyteAngelOfDarkness7
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Title: ^.~
Reviewed By: inuyasha_lover5209(not signed in) On: June 29, 2005 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wouldnt mind being your beta...just email me and keep the stories comein
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