| "The Reality of It All" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: eyeswideopen On: September 03, 2009 19:28 CDT
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i like it but it seems to much like a he said she said. try to vary your writing style a little.
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Reviewed By: volleygirl07 On: August 11, 2008 00:05 CDT
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i really like your fic. Are you going to complete it? It's been awhile from what i can see.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 20:48 CDT
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interesting story. sess and kagome have gone through alot so far. i can't wait to read what is going to happen in the next chapter. update soon
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Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: Isca [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 06:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for updating, i love this story. Great Job! Keep It Up!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story...I hope that Inu and Kikyo get what is due them in the end..Kagome has fought along side all of them and she deserves someone to love her just for her..I've read several Sesshy/Kag pairings and I'm waiting for an update on this one!! Good work!!
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Title: ouch!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Sesshy Jr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 22:38 CDT
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That back stabbing BASTARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OHH, I just want to fucking wring is neck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh,and that damned KIKYOU I want to wring that dead bitches meck as well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyways I love the story and I can tell that is is gonna be a REAL GREAT STORY!!!!!!! I LOVE IT WITH ALL MY HEART!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SESSHY JR.
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Reviewed By: Slayer 666 On: August 29, 2005 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your story is great.I put 10/10 cause you wrote really good. As for some suggestions I think that you should have Kouga meet up with Miroku sango Shippou and Kagome then have him mate with Kagome. Then lets see what Bastard Yasha has to say!!!
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: July 08, 2005 19:45 CDT
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I can't wait to read more of this story. I do hope you have something evil in mind for Kikyo. I can't help but wonder why she would agree to be Inuyasha's mate when she can't stand the thought of him being a hanyou. Please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: kouga_luver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great keep writing. i want to see how this turns out.
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