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| "A Conversation" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Classic Cowboy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nicely done, especially liked the use of the old montage that God's gotta be a woman. over all a nicely written one shot and the charactization was right on. and I agree with the previous reviewer, great stuff but a beta reader to check over the fic would help a lot. A lot of times if you write it you can easily miss typos.
| Reviewed By: just an annoymous person On: June 30, 2005 19:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's a good first chapter, very catchy and all. But ONE suggestion and I don't mean to blow your ego which I'm sure has been inflating for sometime now by other reviews in other stories... get a Beta. You have some potentional and only needs a bit polishing up by someone else.
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