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Title: LOL!!!!!!!! ^-^
Reviewed By: Shadowgirl425294 On: October 04, 2005 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was hilarious! I never thought that something like that could happen to Kagome and Inuyasha! Just imagine if instead of Kagome's friends showing up, it was Hojo! That would be very hard to explain. Please try to do my idea! I wanna know how Inuyasha would react to him, and if Kagome's face turned permenatly red with embarressment! LOL! Please right more! Ja ne! ^-^
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Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 00:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh the hilarity! ^_^
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Title: CONTINUE!
Reviewed By: Kagome87 On: August 30, 2005 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must continue to write this into a full fan fiction instead of just a one-shot! Make sure that there is some lemony goodness in it!*wink wink*. I love this story, you did so well on originality though I wish that there would have been a slight bit more sexual tension; just because it was such a humoruous situation, the fact Kagome had her pants down only serves for more. You have the perfect setting to continue with a full fan fiction. Please use it. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Myralee On: August 03, 2005 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was hilareous. Keep up the good work. ..::Myralee::..
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Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I'm so happy to be your first reviewer! For starters let me just say that it was hilarioius, the whole thing was so well detailed that I could picture it clearly. So great job and I hope you do a sequel
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