| "unexpected love" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: zerousy-LP-chick On: August 06, 2005 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
everything was so sudden, but it was good even though i only read the first chapter so far
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Title: lynzi
Reviewed By: inu_pup [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww thank you. i feel soo luved. glad u didn't stop and i can't wait for the next chappy
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Title: black_my_eyes
Reviewed By: lynzi On: August 01, 2005 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey whoa wait!!! i read this story!!! and i like it too.....plz don't stop it *puppy dog eyes* PLZ PLZ PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: jodibetz On: August 01, 2005 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm reading, I'm reading. Finish this story please!
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Reviewed By: devin lover On: July 25, 2005 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
charles i liked that
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 22:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
LUV UR STORY SO PLEASE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE THE STORY IS SOO DEEP!!!LUV IT!!!=)
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 14:19 CDT
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woah reely sad -::starts to cry::- so please update asap i want to see wat happens next!!!=)
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 23:07 CDT
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PLEASE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!!!=)
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Reviewed By: Linwe On: July 11, 2005 18:52 CDT
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It's a good story so far, but it feels like things are too rushed. I'd suggest slowing things down, maybe drawing them out a little more. Focus a bit more on the characters rather than what's happening. But it's a good story overall and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sexyangelpants [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 21:55 CDT
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LUV UR STORY PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!
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Reviewed By: jodibetz On: July 09, 2005 09:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hello. I hope this review gets through. I've been trying and trying to review (not just your story) but mediaminer's spam protection blocks me most of the time. Sometimes the reviews get through, most of the time, it doesn't. Gets tiring, you know? Writing with so much enthusiasm just to get an error message. Well, if this does get through, know that I like your story. :D
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Title: MoRe DeTaIl
Reviewed By: miroku_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 01:58 CDT
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i don't know this story was not written so well 2 me it had not so much detail maybe i like good details but it was more like a list of events then a story to me
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 13:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOVE UR STORY SO PLEASE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!!!=)
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 17:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY PLEASE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE SO I CAN SEE WAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!=)
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 17:06 CDT
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Please Update this story is soo good i wanna see wat happens at the dance so PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!=)
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