| "unexpected love" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel_ of_ Darkness On: November 17, 2005 01:22 CST
Comment/Review:
that was really good i hope you update soon can't wait to read wht happens next sooo pleae update soon :)
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Reviewed By: inu_pup [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn pervs....*sigh* when will they ever learn...thnx for the dedication dude!...it sure beats fillin my day by listenin to 'foxtrot uniform charlie kilo' all day. which i'm doin right now. lol ... btw i heart your fic, it completes me! update soooonz
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Title: great story dude
Reviewed By: allison sick freak [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
less sex please. just kidding it grreeeaattt. frosted flaks. i love you it awesom.
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Title: lynzi
Reviewed By: inu_pup [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 10:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really awesome and i kno i already reviewed for the august 5th chapter but i was looking through it again :D. and....FLIPPIN AWESOME SONG *listening to it now* hehe JUST GOT THE CD MUHAHA laterz!!!
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Reviewed By: Ax On: August 07, 2005 15:01 CDT
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Hmm....not bad for a first fic. Miroku and Inuyasha getting along? Normally they beat the hell outta each other. Nice originality, and good luck with your next fics! I'm looking forward to them. Wow...sessy isn't evil in this one....
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Reviewed By: zerousy-LP-chick On: August 06, 2005 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
everything was so sudden, but it was good even though i only read the first chapter so far
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Title: lynzi
Reviewed By: inu_pup [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww thank you. i feel soo luved. glad u didn't stop and i can't wait for the next chappy
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Title: black_my_eyes
Reviewed By: lynzi On: August 01, 2005 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey whoa wait!!! i read this story!!! and i like it too.....plz don't stop it *puppy dog eyes* PLZ PLZ PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: jodibetz On: August 01, 2005 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm reading, I'm reading. Finish this story please!
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Reviewed By: devin lover On: July 25, 2005 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
charles i liked that
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 22:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
LUV UR STORY SO PLEASE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE THE STORY IS SOO DEEP!!!LUV IT!!!=)
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 14:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
woah reely sad -::starts to cry::- so please update asap i want to see wat happens next!!!=)
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 23:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!!!=)
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Reviewed By: Linwe On: July 11, 2005 18:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's a good story so far, but it feels like things are too rushed. I'd suggest slowing things down, maybe drawing them out a little more. Focus a bit more on the characters rather than what's happening. But it's a good story overall and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sexyangelpants [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 21:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
LUV UR STORY PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!
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