Reviewed By: VendettaTheory [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see that you are new to MediaMiner! Always nice to get fresh faces. Of course the best fresh faces are the ones who come and post engaging stories in the original section. Caitlin seems a simple enough character but with this magic relevation... who knows? Your writing is very mature and descriptive. You kept me reading after the first chapter, and thats not a skill which can be taught. If anything (and it's so hard not to do in a story dealing with magic) this story is a little like Harry Potter what with the family thing. Not very much though which gets a thumbs up!. I'd like to see where the plot twists from here. Keep writing dude!
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