| "Shisou_Hiryuu" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: *grin*
Reviewed By: Ravenlockes [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic so far! *grin* Since you don't have many reviews yet I thought I'd review myself! I do like the fic so far, but you need to proof-read it. :) It would make spelling/grammar geeks like me happier anyway! Anywho. Ravenlockes out!
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Reviewed By: Kincses [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, you have to update right away, the suspense is killing me!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 10:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy love this story. I suspected Yami was the dragon. Please update soon.
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Title: Forget my last review!!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 10:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wrote that for a different Y/Y fic. I have no idea how that ended up here. Sorry!
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Title: Aaaaawwwww
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I had more time, I'd go into detail about how good this story is. All I can say at this point is that I love it. However, you might want to re-post chapter 15, something is wrong in that the first word or 2 is cut off from the left side of the page.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 03:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Great job I really like this it's wonderful. I hope you update this soon.
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Title: What The . . . ?
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a member of the yahoo group "Pharaoh's Hikari". I read this story before that site was deleted. I loved it so much that I decided to hunt it down. Now that I had found this, I'm overjoyed. And then I read chap. 4 . . . You just jumped to suddenly that it didn't make any sense. I'm hoping you have this posted FF.net, in it's entirety, or at least without the strange time jump (which is the only thing keeping the overall score from being a 10). Unless it's just that you forgot to separate chap. 4 from something that happens later. Either way, I love this story, it very unique and different. Hopefully this isn't finished yet and you can eventually update it again.
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 03:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story a lot I just found it and it's great. I hope you continue.
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