| "Rendezvous" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2010 03:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So its a decent one-shot but it has so much potential to be continued. The fact that she knows they're both youkai gives you a multitude of things to work with on its own. I would love to see this continued but as a one-shot writer myself (mostly) I know what its like when a story doesn't want to be continued (though as far as I'm concerned this one kinda begs for it). I'll be on the lookout to see if you do continue it even if it is unlikely. If anything you could make it a two shot where they discover she's a miko but I won't push (anymore that is). Good fic! -Dusken_Dreamer53
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Title: OHVEY! The innocents
Reviewed By: Raizen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 21:07 CDT
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THE INNOCENTS! THE INNOCENTS!OH THE INNOCENTS! i no longer have a high score on the innocent test! ....But AGAIN Soooooooooo worth it! -^_^- Sincerly Rawr
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Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man! That was sooo hot! I luved it! You HAVE 2 continue it! ^^ -Kohara
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 00:31 CDT
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should really continue it. I can only imagine if Hojo or some guy started hitting on her while they were around. lol I mean demons can be a bit possessive. REALLY GREAT lemons! ^-^
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Title: Rendezvuous
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reallllly like this, please continue to update ... please!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whaa! Dont end it there, it was just getting good!
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Reviewed By: starwind327 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 18:26 CDT
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OMG. THAT WAS hot. lol.
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Title: Rendezvous
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 15:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Ummm... Hi? On: July 18, 2005 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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That was very original. Wouldn't it be funny if they ran into each other again while the boys were doing some spiritual investigation? A sequel would be nice.
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Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could have sworn I reviewed this!! =O well I guess not. Its a good thing I checked!! Okay well I love your story!!! and I agree with everyone else in saying you should definatly consider continuing this!! It was written beautifully and the plot leaves me wanting more! I beg you to continue!!
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Reviewed By: Blackat On: July 03, 2005 10:52 CDT
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I agree with everyone else I think you should definatly continue great lemons
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 07:59 CDT
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Very well done, I haven't seen a setup like this before between the three of them. I definitely think you should seriously consider continuing this. Keep up the good work!
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Title: Review Chapter One
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun (Who can't sign in right now) On: July 02, 2005 01:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was nice and steamy. I hope you're going to continue this until they find out what/who she is and about her history. If you do, don't rush the revelation of information, but draw it out. Also, keep in mind the place in the YYH timeline you want this to occur. I would say after Yusuke becomes a demon, just as a suggestion. I love the interactions, and I can't wait for them to find out about her. Please take care and continue! Ja ne, Kin.
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Reviewed By: WindDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you really should continue it. I like how you described everything. My eyes were really glued to the screen. Too bad that it's only a one shot really. If you decide to add others to you7r collection I'll definately read 'em.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 16:19 CDT
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nice lemons, too bad it's a one shot, you should continue it.
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