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| "Broken angel" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: hmm
Reviewed By: callie333 On: September 28, 2005 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm.. is a "borken" angel similar to a broken one? If you are going to post awful angsty poetry on the web then at least run it though a spell check first, at the moment it's more hilarious than tragic.
| Title: okay...
Reviewed By: a cynic On: September 18, 2005 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay, it's true that we don't know anything about your life. However, it's difficult to take your poem seriously or empathise if every other word is spelt wrong and there are more grammar mistakes than holes in swiss cheese. This is evident even in the summaries of your other fics, which will put a lot of readers off. I suggest you run everything through a spell check and/or a beta reader next time.
| Title: to wangst
Reviewed By: pure hope A.K.A THAT AUTHOR On: August 10, 2005 20:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok since ur to much of a wimp to sign in *glares* im gunna tell you here!! you dnt know me so dont assume you know this and that about my life and think that i havn't been thru alot coz i have to much for a normal 14 year old so unless you live my life you cant dictate me so get a life or better yet get an account so i can email you this oh and until you write a poem you do not have the proper athority to flame 1 jack ass
| Title: wangst
Reviewed By: .... On: August 10, 2005 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
good god. so much wangst that it ended up on GAFF. heres what they say... Quote: From my eye falls a single tear. No one will notice. That's right. You're crying, and NO ONE CARES. That's life. Accept it and stop the wangst. Quote: As i continue to disappeire. Your spell check has disappeared first. Quote: All rapped up in there secrets and lies. *puts on the bling bling* "Yo, I gotta my secrets and lies, yo. Secretsecretssecrets and lie lie lie, yo' bad wangst makes me wanna die!" . . . I never said I was a good rapper. Nevertheless, I'm a better rapper than this person is a writer. Quote: For when i get enough time to heal. My peace and tranqwilaty they dare to steal. So that's what's wrong with you. Someone stole your Tranqwilaty. Well, the doctor should be able to get you a new prescription soon. Quote: Going thru life unoticed. Never really there. For every time i try to fight. They knock me back down with not a care "And thus ends the short, angsty tale of the Punching Bag. Now, we get to hear poetry from the treadmill about always being stepped on. It appears to have a rougher life than yours." Quote: To rapped up in all the promises no one seems to keep. "The check's in the mail, no one has to hear your angsty wail. My promises aren't ones to keep, and this fic makes me wanna sleep, yo."
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