| "Tell Tale, Can't Stay" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: i have lots im just not logged into any of them On: July 17, 2005 23:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
its really good so far...update soon please!!
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Title: ^.^;;;
Reviewed By: Ryosei_Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 01:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh yeah. I mean the overall rating to be 8 not 7. Ooops. ^__^;
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: Ryosei_Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
...^.^ Hi. You remember me right? Reviewed my fic. I'm curious so I had to check out your stuffs too. Anyways, Gave you a 5 on creativity cause you see self-insertion fics all the time. I hope that didn't offend you. ^^; Also...the 9 for spelling and grammar probably ... well... Raven's gem on her chakra is what you meant I think. Cause a chakra is a ... it's an abstract thing. It can't be seen or touched...Gah. It's a witch thing. *changes spelling and grammar to ten* Yes I do actually type stuff then add that I've changed it when writing. I'm weird like that. Anyways, I'm interested enough that I'm gonna check back for the next chapter! ^__^
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Reviewed By: kagome_8 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was Very good it seemed as if the creator of the story wrote it himself great us of caraters. It was Okay to read add a little bit more Comedy and your set for a great story.
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