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Reviewed By: Tormented Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 15:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon.
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Reviewed By: inu - fan On: July 27, 2005 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon!!!!
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Title: Undercover Demon
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 11:00 CDT
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:D!!! I LOVED that chapter the MOST^^A couch is still a couch, trust me. The only couches that probably should be more comfortable are the ones that turn into beds. Although I just don't understand why they even made them. Why would somebody want to sleep on a couch? Also, doesn't cleaning the house just bite? My parents are making me, their own daughter clean their house. I wouldn't mind, but my bros and sis aren't helping..ANYWAYS, YAY for the lemon!!I love lemons^^. P.S. RADISH IS WRONG!
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 17:46 CDT
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Hmm, Dilanda is grumpy. Software spell-check can catch things better than any human can, and it's always on call, you don't have to go find it and ask it to help like with a person, all the while hoping it actually knows how to spell any better than you do. This is pretty much the whole reason why spell-check was invented, it's more convenient than harassing people to check your spelling. Next, rich people tend to have better things, period, couches included. Better couches are more comfortable couches. 2+2=4. See?
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Title: Undercover Demon
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 23:25 CDT
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Radish is an idiot....why not just get someone to proof-read your stories before you post? Also, why would rich peoples couches be more comfortable? Couches are not meant to be slept on.....Anyways, I like how often you're updating..that's just awesome, but the chapters seem to be getting shorter and shorter (to me). Don't rush yourself, buddy - It's summer vacation! Relax every now and then:P!
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mostly reviewing so I can respond to your spell-check woes, openoffice.org is a free office suite comparable to Microsoft Office. I've never used it, but I'm sure at the very least it has a word-processor with a spell-checker, so it's something to try. As for the story, it's been cute so far. The mates-before-love thing should be interesting. But what was Kagome's random day-long black-out the morning after about? And why was she so dead-set against the couch in the beginning of the story? Couches are plenty comfortable for sleeping on. Especially rich people's couches.
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Title: Undercover Demon
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 21:18 CDT
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THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU for the lemon scene. I love how this stroy is going now more than I did before...yeah, I'm a total pervert....
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Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is pretty good. I like comedy aspect alot.
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Reviewed By: Hallie On: July 15, 2005 03:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I'm somewhat disappointed. This would actually be a good story if there wasn't so many errors. Spell check is good when it comes to editing and proof-reading. I'll admit I'm not the world's best speller but all the errors I saw really made it hard to read. I also think that most of the things happened a little too fast and some things didn't make sense. I think you could have gotten away with Rating this R because it's not really hentai. Hallie (robinstar)
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Reviewed By: black_talisman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 07:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting story. you move really good on with your story, which makes it keeping interesting. continue!
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is getting more and more interesting with each chapter
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Title: Undercover Demon
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 16:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is getting better and better^^ This almost turned hentai!YAY!
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Reviewed By: Danchik On: July 09, 2005 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY. AWESOME. WTG.
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Title: MOrEEE
Reviewed By: Berry On: July 09, 2005 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLz update soon !!!!!! This fic is awsommmmeee This story is keepin me on the edge of my seat its sweeeeeet!!!!! Keep goin ur doin grrrrrrrrrrrrrreat =D=D=D=D=D=D
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Reviewed By: Megumiinelite [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 00:48 CDT
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*waits for more* Nice. it was exciting, while still beign appropriate.
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