| "Undercover Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is pretty good. I like comedy aspect alot.
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Reviewed By: Hallie On: July 15, 2005 03:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I'm somewhat disappointed. This would actually be a good story if there wasn't so many errors. Spell check is good when it comes to editing and proof-reading. I'll admit I'm not the world's best speller but all the errors I saw really made it hard to read. I also think that most of the things happened a little too fast and some things didn't make sense. I think you could have gotten away with Rating this R because it's not really hentai. Hallie (robinstar)
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Reviewed By: black_talisman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 07:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting story. you move really good on with your story, which makes it keeping interesting. continue!
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is getting more and more interesting with each chapter
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Title: Undercover Demon
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 16:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is getting better and better^^ This almost turned hentai!YAY!
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Reviewed By: Danchik On: July 09, 2005 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY. AWESOME. WTG.
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Title: MOrEEE
Reviewed By: Berry On: July 09, 2005 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLz update soon !!!!!! This fic is awsommmmeee This story is keepin me on the edge of my seat its sweeeeeet!!!!! Keep goin ur doin grrrrrrrrrrrrrreat =D=D=D=D=D=D
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Reviewed By: Megumiinelite [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 00:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
*waits for more* Nice. it was exciting, while still beign appropriate.
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Title: Undercover Demon
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE it when authors post more than one chapter in a day^^ The overall rating just went up to a perfect 10^^ Is this going to have any lemons?
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Lady_Relm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 13:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this story so far it has a good story board to it and you should keep up on it and update real soon.
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Title: Undercover Demon
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 14:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was a very cute little chapter. It was short and cute x.x There's really nothing to say...I hope you update soon
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Title: MORE!!!!
Reviewed By: Kaggy-chan2202 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 02:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE!!! Write more!!! I loved it its awsome!!! I love it when Kags gets Inu angry!!! Oh and Inu is so horny...are you really going to hold true to the won't have sex til married thing??? Cause that is a long way away at the rate this fic is goin!!! Well I still think this is a awsome fic and I hope you write more!!!
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Title: Undercover Demon
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The third chapter is much better (written) than the others. The story's going good so far, keep it up:P
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Title: great
Reviewed By: leyley On: July 03, 2005 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love hurry and write the next chapter
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Reviewed By: NekoFluffylover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! great beginnin, update soooooon plzzzzz!! it sounds like it'll be great.
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