| "Undercover Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Title: Undercover Demon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 13:19 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Undercover Demon
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 17:01 CDT
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It's shorter now....not that it really matters^^ ~Inspector Obvious
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Title: Undercover Demon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 15:00 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AW MAN! Thats sooo wrong....please update soon! *runs off to read yout other fics*
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Title: Undercover Demon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 21:06 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Evangeline_Lily On: August 08, 2005 11:46 CDT
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It's REALLY good you had better continue or else I'm doomed to die a painful, slow death becuase I was unable to read. (I'm not crazy!) But seriously your stories are good and you should continue writing them.
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Title: Undercover Demon
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 22:00 CDT
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I know how you feel....work never seems to end...
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Title: Undercover Demon
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 21:10 CDT
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Mediaminer didn't even send me an e-mail telling me this was updated...how annoying...anyways, it's going great..
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Reviewed By: Tormented Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 15:16 CDT
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please update soon.
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Reviewed By: inu - fan On: July 27, 2005 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon!!!!
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Title: Undercover Demon
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 11:00 CDT
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:D!!! I LOVED that chapter the MOST^^A couch is still a couch, trust me. The only couches that probably should be more comfortable are the ones that turn into beds. Although I just don't understand why they even made them. Why would somebody want to sleep on a couch? Also, doesn't cleaning the house just bite? My parents are making me, their own daughter clean their house. I wouldn't mind, but my bros and sis aren't helping..ANYWAYS, YAY for the lemon!!I love lemons^^. P.S. RADISH IS WRONG!
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 17:46 CDT
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Hmm, Dilanda is grumpy. Software spell-check can catch things better than any human can, and it's always on call, you don't have to go find it and ask it to help like with a person, all the while hoping it actually knows how to spell any better than you do. This is pretty much the whole reason why spell-check was invented, it's more convenient than harassing people to check your spelling. Next, rich people tend to have better things, period, couches included. Better couches are more comfortable couches. 2+2=4. See?
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Title: Undercover Demon
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 23:25 CDT
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Radish is an idiot....why not just get someone to proof-read your stories before you post? Also, why would rich peoples couches be more comfortable? Couches are not meant to be slept on.....Anyways, I like how often you're updating..that's just awesome, but the chapters seem to be getting shorter and shorter (to me). Don't rush yourself, buddy - It's summer vacation! Relax every now and then:P!
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mostly reviewing so I can respond to your spell-check woes, openoffice.org is a free office suite comparable to Microsoft Office. I've never used it, but I'm sure at the very least it has a word-processor with a spell-checker, so it's something to try. As for the story, it's been cute so far. The mates-before-love thing should be interesting. But what was Kagome's random day-long black-out the morning after about? And why was she so dead-set against the couch in the beginning of the story? Couches are plenty comfortable for sleeping on. Especially rich people's couches.
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Title: Undercover Demon
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 21:18 CDT
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THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU for the lemon scene. I love how this stroy is going now more than I did before...yeah, I'm a total pervert....
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