| "Hidden Reality" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 06:33 CDT
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PLEASE UPDATE ON THIS STORY!! you are so good and i want to read if you don't me saying...
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Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really like the new chapter! keep up the good work!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 09:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really like the new chapter!!! plz keep up the good work!! and plz update soon!!!!~Candie~
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Reviewed By: 23kags23 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing i want 2 know what happens between inuyasha and kagome!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: December 06, 2005 21:46 CST
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When what happen? Wait you can leave it like that.Man I hate cliffy.Please write soon. I bet all throughtout dinner Kagome was thinking if only you knew how my mother really acted. When she's not acting for strangers.
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Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really like your story!! keep up the good work! and please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2005 22:07 CDT
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That's what I call a mood swing. She went from throwing wine to kissing her agent. Waht's up with that. And why does Inuyasha have a problem with Kagome.
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 (not logged in) On: September 08, 2005 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty good plot going...but you are moving a bit fast...and I like that your putting detail into things...also you need to try and put more umph into it...I don't really know what umph is...but I guess you need it...lol...good luck...great job so far...luvs Ty
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Reviewed By: brokenhate On: September 07, 2005 21:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
very interesting story. i love it. hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: jessy8a10 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 18:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
i loved the chapter please update soon
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Reviewed By: kagsessdaughter Silver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting.....
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Reviewed By: oahtmeal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 14:58 CDT
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wow i really your story so far. i hope u update soon
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Reviewed By: jessy8a10 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 18:46 CDT
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hi!!! your fic sounds very interesting! poor kAgome update soon please
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