| "Midnight Love Affair" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: U83R 1337 H4X0R [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story even tho it hasnt developed into "intimate stuff" yet. i hope this is constructive critisism, but i think you should work on incorperating background info into story(evry thing is explained too deeply at the moment it appears i.e. the story pops up rather than unfold). keep up the good work and i hope to read future chapters.
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Reviewed By: Polaris11 On: August 05, 2005 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you easily let both characters flow in mutual motion together- their thoughts and feelings, especially Seth's. But...no romance yet?!! Can't wait, hurry and update!
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Reviewed By: supernerd3333 On: July 30, 2005 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool. I really enjoyed this fic and can't wait to read more. Update soon.
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