| "Love, Trust, and an Alien" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: kiten On: December 26, 2005 12:11 CST
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just as a warning it has been longer then one week I do expect a update sometime soon please
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Title: That's so beautiful!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 11:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love that. Veggie is so cute in this fic! Keep writing! I'll keep reading!
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL...the cat's name is Tama. It is actually stated that in the manga. LOL...POOKEY! I freaking love it.
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Title: It's me! ^_^
Reviewed By: DragonOfDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 13:16 CDT
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Other than having quite a few grammatic errors (lol, Im one to talk) and a little OOC-ness on Veggie's part(i.e. telling Bulma he loved her, even if it was just a dream), I really liked it! You got the insults down, as well as (what's the right way to say this?) Vegeta's VIEW on life... Liking the story as well as the lemon in that previous chapter. Keep it up!! ^_^ ~~ALI~~ Oh, and Im expecting my new laptop to come in the mail sometime soon; meaning I'll be updating my own stories a lot more frequently! ^^ bye!
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Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 22:55 CDT
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How do you hurt the Prince's feelings? I love how they can have an argument in the middle of a bank robbery.
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Reviewed By: Hunny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I am extremely lazy. No it doesn't suck it's actually quite entertaining. Keep up the good work and don't let us "love to read/hate to review types get you down!
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Reviewed By: Heiress2thethrone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i must say that i am definately enjoying your story. just a minor correction, according to dbz america style the gr could go up to 3000 before it exploded, im not sure how far it could go up japanese style but i just figured id let you know. also you definately should go back and watch the episodes you missed, basically quick nonlemon summaries of the 3 years and in only like 3 episodes. but i definately like this story and i can't wait for you to update. nice lemon by the way. did you say it was your first because it wasn't bad at all. nice job.
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Reviewed By: EbonyBlaze134 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey its okay, I understand how you feel. It's not that easy. Anyway I think your story is pretty darn good. It seems a little different than the other 'three years' stories. Very interesting. Keep up the good work! ^.^
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Title: katie_lovey_anime
Reviewed By: katie_lovey_anime [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. i am an author as well and i know how hard it is to be without reviews. it dosent mean your stories are bad it just means your readers are lazy. like i said keep writing i love it.... If you like CCS S&S fics then check my story out under my author name katie_lovey_anime ... if not good luck and i'm reading your story. remember you at least have one reader and she is greatfull for your fresh new ideas and story. Lastly may your ideas be plentiful and your writers block non-existant. Keep writing... you have one hell of a story ^_^ O.o ^_- ^_^ O.o ^_- ^_^ O.o ^_- ^_^ O.o
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