Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ The Moon and the Progress Within

By: valeyard
Story that inspired me to write "A Work in Progress" If you love that story, you should love this.

Well, I found out this story got runner up in the 2002 Senennki Contest. I got runner-up in the general category. You can see the results here:

http://www.gokugirl.com/contest/02_results.html

Here's what they said:

The Moon and the Progress Within by Valeyard Runner-Up
Characterization: 5
Grammar: 5
Plot: 5
Punctuation: 5
Spelling: 5
Grand Total: 25
This was the absolute best a one-shot could be. Every aspect was absolutely flawless. The characterization between Bulma and Vegeta was totally IC, and I loved the great plot. After reading this, it left me in awe. It litterally went into the depths of the two's relationship, and Vegeta's hatred for Goku, Frieza and the sympathy and pity of others. The last line totally described the title and the ending was awesome. This is the best one-shot I've ever read!

Me so happy:-)

Anime/Manga: Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Hentai / Drama | Type: One Shot | Uploaded On: 08.21.2002 | Pages: 3 | Words: 2.3K | Visits: 1.5K | Status: Completed