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The gray light of the predawn awoke Kagome gently. The first thing she was aware of was that she was not in her sleeping bag, but was instead cradled in the arms of her lover. She listened to the strong beating of his heart for a few minutes, before cracking her eyes open. The fire was a pile of glowing embers illuminating the camp with its orange glow.
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I loved the end! OMG!
I love how you made it go from first person to third person so perfectly. I usually stay away from first person stories but I decided to give this one a chance and I am happy I did. Incredible!