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It was a normal night for Kagome and her group. Everyone was asleep in their campsite. Kagome is asleep in her sleeping bag with Shippo snuggling in her side. Inuyasha has left them to go to the undead pot named Kikyo. In the meantime at the campsite, an injured panther demon walks in and sits near the campfire.
Comments
The story was really enjoyable and has lots of action and strong character moments, especially with Kagome showing her courage. Grimmjow’s backstory is intriguing, and the group’s reasons for fighting Naraku are interesting. The pacing feels a little rushed, and some of the dialogue could be clearer, but overall, it’s an engaging story with a lot of potential.